subcontinental86 Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 Monsters:Lore - You can only control 1 "Celestial Dragon - Envoy of Heaven" at a time. This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except by removing from play a "Judgment Dragon'' and 4 "Lightsworn" monsters from your Graveyard. Once per duel you can send all cards from each players' field and hand, except your "Celestial Dragon - Envoy of Heaven," to the the Graveyard. If you activate this effect, your opponent draws 2 cards during the next Draw Phase.Image Credit Lore - You can remove from play this card from your Graveyard and appropriate non-Tuner Synchro Material Monster(s) from the field to Synchro Summon 1 Synchro Monster. During each of your End Phases, if this card is out of play, send 3 cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard.Image Credit Spells:Lore - Draw 3 cards, then remove from play 1 LIGHT monster from your hand and 1 card from your Graveyard. If you do not have a LIGHT monster in your hand and a card in your Graveyard to remove, send all cards in your hand out of play.Image Credit Traps:Lore - If this card is sent from the Deck to the Graveyard, set it. Discard 1 card. Select 1 LIGHT monster with 1500 or less attack from your Graveyard and add it to your hand. I'm no artist, so these images were found on Google Images. They do have signatures of the artist on their art, so credit is still given to them. I kind of want a better picture of Celestial Dragon, and I definitely need one for Elegant Mill. I'll be making a Lightsworn Synchro soon. Please rate/comment/etc.! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 these are really good for a one star member! +rep for you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 These are good. 9.5/10. You are a talented newbie. IMG Credit? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
subcontinental86 Posted February 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 Thanks! I went back and added image credits. Anybody up for creating some art for Elegant Mill? I was thinking maybe an Honest returning to hand, or something similar. I also edited Kyrios' lore to say "During each of YOUR end phases" instead of each end phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 eh, 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pppgggr Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 GOOD FIRST FEW CARDS. I WAS NO WHERE NEAR AS GOOD AS YOU WHEN I STARTED. i think you will do well in that contest you talked about in you introduction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 The first one is actually not that bad although it requires the use of a banworthy card and has a flaw in the Effect that would only permit this card to be at 1 on a Ban List but I can't think of a thing to make the card less flawed without making it somewhat banworthy. I would remove the requirement of having to remove a Judgment Dragon from play otherwise this card is unplayable in a good format. The Tuner is quite good although I am not sure if it should be able to Synchro Summon something using any non-Tuner. I would restrict the non-Tuners to the Lightsworn Archetype. Allure of Brightness is overpowered. Even if it is restricted to LIGHT-based Decks it is stilloverpowered. You draw 3 cards at the cost of removing a LIGHT monster in your hand from play and a card in your Graveyard. If it required you to remove 2 LIGHT monsters in your hand from play it would be much more fair but not a good card. I would make this card more Allure of Darkness-like. Much more acceptable. Elegant Mill is OK. It should've been a Spell Card that activates upon being milled. Pretty good cards overall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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