EocDragon Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 Pictures are Mine. [spoiler=Nightmare Koumori Dragon] [spoiler=Card Lore] This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 face-up "Koumori Dragon" you control. Whenever this monster destroys a monster your opponent controls, you can Special Summon the destroyed monster to your side of the field with 1 Soul Counter on it. The ATK and DEF of any monster with a Soul Counter becomes half of its original ATK and DEF and cannot use their effects. When a monster with a Soul Counter is destroyed, it is shuffled into its owner's deck. Increase the ATK and DEF of this monster by 300 for each Soul Counter on the field. [spoiler=Mecha Destruction Snail] [spoiler=Card Lore] This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 face-up "Mechanical Snail" you control. During your Battle Phase, if this monster destroyed a monster your opponent controls by battle, you can destroy 1 face-up Spell or Trap card your opponent controls. When a monster that has fewer stars than this monster targets this monster with an effect, you can destroy that monster. If you do, this monster cannot attack this turn. If this monster would be destroyed, you can remove 1 Machine-type monster in your Graveyard from play instead. [spoiler=Psionic Resonance ] [spoiler=Card Lore] This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 face-up "Psychic Kappa" you control. While this monster is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot attack your Life Points directly. Once per turn, if your opponent attacks a monster you control, you can negate the attack by lowering the DEF of this card by 300. When this monster is sent to the Graveyard from the field, the effects of all face-up Spell and Trap cards are negated and no Spell or Trap cards can be activated. Negate this effect on the 3rd turn after this monster is sent to the Graveyard. Seeing as Nightmare Koumori Dragon was relatively succesful, I'm going to go ahead with my concept. I have a few monsters that I know I want to do, but I will also take suggestions. The monsters have to be normal monsters that are relatively weak. I would prefer that they be from older sets. [spoiler=Monsters to Do] Yaranzo, Ancient Elf, Three Headed Geedo, The Portrait's Secret Please Rate/Comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 Would totally use with Counter Cleaner, to get rid of the Soul Counter. Then you actually dodge both downsides. The ATK goes back to normal, AND it doesn't get shuffled back into their deck (since it isn't a monster with a Soul Counter anymore, lolol) after being killed. Gaining 300 ATK is not really good enough to let yourself sit there with a 0/0 monster. >_> 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted February 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 I actually intended for them to be used as cheap tributes and such, but I see how it could actually be harmful. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 nice card 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dramatic Crossroad Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 My ocg suggestion.Card Lore: This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 face-up "Koumori Dragon" you control. When this monster destroys a monster your opponent controls, you can Special Summon the destroyed monster to your side of the field and place 1 Soul Counter on it.(Monsters with Soul Counter cannot activate their effects and their original ATK and DEF is halved). When a monster with a Soul Counter is destroyed, it is shuffled into its owner's Deck. Increase the ATK and DEF of this monster by 300 for each Soul Counter on the field. Now about the name... I suppose it should be "Nightmare Koumori Dragon"(Nightmare Bat Dragon), cause "Koumori Dragon" actually means "Bat Dragon", and your full translation of the name as it is right now is "Bat Nightmare Dragon" that sounds ok, but can be cooler. I respect custom art and it looks awesome . 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
"DA CRANK" Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 its ok:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 Some OCG errorz but the card is good so youget an 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 Nice idea. 8/10. Good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 That is some pretty sweet card art if you drew it yourself. The effect is nothing to sneeze at either. 9.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted February 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 Thank you for the replies. I made some fixes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 That is totally good! The picture is great, and effect creative. The only thing I would say that it might be a little too powerful. 9/7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 nice pic and effect. 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massacrewolf13 Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 I used to Koumori Dragon in all of my decks. I like this card. 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted February 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 Mechanical Destruction Snail added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 I haven't judged a card in a while, but I guess I would say 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 I just noticed and OCG error. In the second card it should say: When a monster which Level is lower than this card targets this monster with an effect, it seems a bit OP. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted February 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 Thank you, I was not really sure how to word that sentence. I realize that Mecha Destruction Snail seems a bit OP, but you have to summon him with a face-up Mechanical Snail, which is a terrible monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 Nice Idea 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FateTheSeer Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 these are cool what about making an upgraded harpie lady lol i like them 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 not to bad its acctually a prett decent card nice effects nice pics maybe slightly oped, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted February 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Thank you for the rates Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Archon Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 love how you're doing this and good cards. on another note here is a suggestion how about Gemini elf? i don't know but just keep making these awesome cards 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Drawings...practice more. Effects...try again.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 interesting choice using snail to remake. i don't think anyone used that card EVER. the pics are well done. plus koumori is one of my favorites. good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted February 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 That's the point, I'm creating reasons to use the old weak cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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