YamiCardMaker Posted September 21, 2007 Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 Heres A little preview jaden and the gang have graduated an have stuck together they are at kaibaland looking for someopponents-ENJOY! By the way created cards are in brackets [ ] Episode 1- Activate Neo-Fusion-Blue Eyes Neos Dragon! Jaden: Syrus, Hasslberry theres seto kaiba!Hassleberry:10-4 SargJaden: Ive Just gotta duel himSyrus: Wait up J!(As he runs 2 men in strange masks block his path)Mask 1: He he he(Grabs Hold Of Jaden)Hassleberry: Get off of him!(Other Mask grabs Hassleberry)Seto: I will not have this in My amusment park now LeaveMask 2: We are not leaving till we get your blue eyes white dragon cardsSeto: Ill tell you what duel me if I win you leave if you win you get the cards(The Mass Drop Jaden And hassleberry)Jaden: Kaiba, You cant do this alone Let me help youSeto: I dont need youSyrus: Kaiba let jaden help youSeto: Fine just dont cramp my dueling StyleJaden: No need to worry about that DUEL! Mask 1: Ok heres how it Goes Me first then Seto Mask 2: Then Me then Jaden We have 8000 combined life points and...Seto: Just get on with it!Mask 1: Okay Draw! I play 1 monster In defence mode and 1 card face down and end my turnSeto: You call that A move? Now let me GoJaden: Good luckSeto: I dont need luck! I summon Battle Ox! (1700/1000) but as I cant attack I end my turnMask 2: Right Then Like my Brother I set a monster and Play 1 card face down and end my turnJaden: My turn Draw! And I play A monster in defence mode an 1 card face down Im doneMask 1: Now We can attackMask 2: Your doneMask 1: I sacrifice our monsters to summon [Maskiliam the mask beast] (2200/1500) and because of his effect by discarding a monster card from my hand you take 700 points of damage*Jaden And Setos Life points-7300*Mask 1: Attck Setos Battle OxJaden: Ill save ya seto Activate negate attackMask 1: Oh well I end my turnSeto: Hmm.. I Sacrifice our monsters to summon Blue eyes white dragon (3000/2500) attack his Maskilliam*Mask 1 and 2's Life points 7200*(Maskilliam Remains on the field)Seto: Why is that monster still there Mask 1: When he is destroyed by discarding 1 monster who has more attack points than him he can be ressurectedMask 2: Yes and that effect lets me discard the monster and I discared [Masked Guardia] (3000/???)Seto: I end my turn with a face down cardMask 2: Then its my move I play this I play [Maskilliam Curse] So by paying 1000 life pionts Maskilliam Gains 1000 attack points*Mask 1 and 2's life points 6200*Mask 2: Now maskilliam attack!Seto: I play mirror force so your maskilliam goesMask 2: I discard Masked Mammoth (2500/1500) So maskilliam stays But I end my turnJaden: My turn. Brilliant I Play The spell card fake hero to suumon elemental hero neos! And next i play [Neos-Fusion] So i can fuse Neos And blue eyes to form Blue eyes neos dragon! Youll never stop him! Next Episode-Mask Guardia Vs Blue Eyes Neos Dragon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted September 22, 2007 Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 It sounds kinda... Well, not-prepared. There is no explanation why "Jaden and the gang" is stuck at Kaiba Land (except for that "they are looking for opponents") But why would they go to Kaiba Land for that? Anyway, I give it a 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted September 22, 2007 Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 It sounds kinda... Well, not-prepared. There is no explanation why "Jaden and the gang" is stuck at Kaiba Land (except for that "they are looking for opponents") But why would they go to Kaiba Land for that? Anyway, I give it a 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiCardMaker Posted September 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 I dunno State of the art dueling system? Im sure they will keep getting better Next episode will be out today once I get back from footy training (Soccer if youre american) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiCardMaker Posted September 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 I dunno State of the art dueling system? Im sure they will keep getting better Next episode will be out today once I get back from footy training (Soccer if youre american) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiCardMaker Posted September 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 Previously on shadow Mountain... Mask 2: Now maskilliam attack!Seto: I play mirror force so your maskilliam goesMask 2: I discard Masked Mammoth (2500/1500) So maskilliam stays But I end my turnJaden: My turn. Brilliant I Play The spell card fake hero to suumon elemental hero neos! And next i play [Neos-Fusion] So i can fuse Neos And blue eyes to form Blue eyes neos dragon! Youll never stop him! Next Episode-Mask Guardia Vs Blue Eyes Neos Dragon! Jaden: Meet my neos Dragon (3800/2000)Seto: Hmm thats one big monster you just summonedMask 1: If you think you can destroy maskilliam then go aheadMask 2: Aslong as we discard a monster with more attackMask 1: Maskilliam is safeJaden: Yes but there is one question leftSeto: Whats that?Jaden: What happens when your hand is empty!Mask 2: What?Jaden: When neos dragon is summoned all cards in our hands go to the graveyardMask 2: No!Jaden: You bet neos Dragon attack White Space Lightning!(Maskilliam dissapears in the light from neos Dragons attack)*Mask 1 and 2's life points-4600*Mask 2: HA! by destroying you have unleashed a even greater power!Seto: An even greater powerMask 1: Thanks to the ability of maskilliam whenhe is destroyed I can summon This from my graveyard MEET [MASKED GUARDIA]! (3000/????)Seto: Impressive but it cannot bestroy the neos dragonMask 2: We shall see next turnJaden: Guess its your moveMask 1: Ok now my turn Draw....Hmmm....I Send This monster from my hand to the graveyard he is Petit mask (800/800) and now my monster absorbs his attack (3800/????)Seto: Now thier attacks are equal!Mask 1: Not quite maksed guardia can't be destroyed if he is attacking a monster with the same attack! So masked Guardia attack!(Blue eyes neos dragon dissapears)Mask 1: Your moveSeto: My turn and I play card of sanctity so I can draw 5 card but I 5 turns I discard my entire handMask 2: it dosent matterSeto: Id say it does First I summon lord of dragons (1200/800) and play the spell card flute of summoning Dragons to summon 2 blue eyes white dragons (3000/2500) next I play monster reborn to bring back Blue eyes (3000/2500) next, Polymerazation so come out Blue eyes ultimate dragon (4500/3800)Masks 1 and 2: Grr.. To be continuied..... Next episode: Blue eyes Ultimate vs Maksed Guardia! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiCardMaker Posted September 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 Previously on shadow Mountain... Mask 2: Now maskilliam attack!Seto: I play mirror force so your maskilliam goesMask 2: I discard Masked Mammoth (2500/1500) So maskilliam stays But I end my turnJaden: My turn. Brilliant I Play The spell card fake hero to suumon elemental hero neos! And next i play [Neos-Fusion] So i can fuse Neos And blue eyes to form Blue eyes neos dragon! Youll never stop him! Next Episode-Mask Guardia Vs Blue Eyes Neos Dragon! Jaden: Meet my neos Dragon (3800/2000)Seto: Hmm thats one big monster you just summonedMask 1: If you think you can destroy maskilliam then go aheadMask 2: Aslong as we discard a monster with more attackMask 1: Maskilliam is safeJaden: Yes but there is one question leftSeto: Whats that?Jaden: What happens when your hand is empty!Mask 2: What?Jaden: When neos dragon is summoned all cards in our hands go to the graveyardMask 2: No!Jaden: You bet neos Dragon attack White Space Lightning!(Maskilliam dissapears in the light from neos Dragons attack)*Mask 1 and 2's life points-4600*Mask 2: HA! by destroying you have unleashed a even greater power!Seto: An even greater powerMask 1: Thanks to the ability of maskilliam whenhe is destroyed I can summon This from my graveyard MEET [MASKED GUARDIA]! (3000/????)Seto: Impressive but it cannot bestroy the neos dragonMask 2: We shall see next turnJaden: Guess its your moveMask 1: Ok now my turn Draw....Hmmm....I Send This monster from my hand to the graveyard he is Petit mask (800/800) and now my monster absorbs his attack (3800/????)Seto: Now thier attacks are equal!Mask 1: Not quite maksed guardia can't be destroyed if he is attacking a monster with the same attack! So masked Guardia attack!(Blue eyes neos dragon dissapears)Mask 1: Your moveSeto: My turn and I play card of sanctity so I can draw 5 card but I 5 turns I discard my entire handMask 2: it dosent matterSeto: Id say it does First I summon lord of dragons (1200/800) and play the spell card flute of summoning Dragons to summon 2 blue eyes white dragons (3000/2500) next I play monster reborn to bring back Blue eyes (3000/2500) next, Polymerazation so come out Blue eyes ultimate dragon (4500/3800)Masks 1 and 2: Grr.. To be continuied..... Next episode: Blue eyes Ultimate vs Maksed Guardia! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 22, 2007 Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 Omission: Card of Sanctity does not do that effect, your mistaken it with card of demise. Otherwise, it's kinda short and seems rather rushed. Try slowing down a bit, and include more traps and dialogue. Complexity also helps a duel/story be more intresting, just don't be too complex. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 22, 2007 Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 Omission: Card of Sanctity does not do that effect, your mistaken it with card of demise. Otherwise, it's kinda short and seems rather rushed. Try slowing down a bit, and include more traps and dialogue. Complexity also helps a duel/story be more intresting, just don't be too complex. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiCardMaker Posted September 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 Like I said Before Ill try and make them get better every time Sorry if I dissaponted ya Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiCardMaker Posted September 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 Like I said Before Ill try and make them get better every time Sorry if I dissaponted ya Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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