Monsta Masha Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 Hi guys,This is my first Yu-Gi-Oh Card. I didn't make the image, I found it on the inetrnet, but, oh well. EffectWhen equipped, this card will enable your monster to attack your opponent directly with 10 times the number of monsters in your graveyard. Effect Explained:Basically, say you have 5 monsters in your graveyard. You would times 5 by 10 to get 50. That means that you deal 50 points of damage to your opponents life points. I'll accept any constructive criticism to try and make my future cards better. Thanks,Monsta Masha The image used can e found at:http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h208/sarahhogue/zombies.jpg Credit to xzMasteRzx for fixing up the OCG for me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 So Op'ed that words cannot describe it. And terrible OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monsta Masha Posted February 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 So Op'ed that words cannot describe it. And terrible OCG. Sorry about that. It's just that I'm new here and I have no idea how to understand the OCG. I'm sorry if this is a noobish question to ask, but what does op'ed mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 OverPowered. Yep, the OCG is pretty bad and it's OP'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Southparkerstan Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 I dont really understand the effect, but if you fix it up a bit then this would be an awesome card. Its great for a first try! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 Uh, dude, the OCG grammar is horrible and there's not even 10 monster zones on 1 side of the field. Still, I love that I can use a tuner to deal 20,000 damage to my opponent's Life Points.:D Score: 1/10I dont really understand the effect' date=' but if you fix it up a bit then this would be an awesome card. Its great for a first try![/quote'] I agree. Fix it a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monsta Masha Posted February 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 Basically, say you have 5 monsters in your graveyard. You would times 5 by 10 to get 50. That means that you deal 50 points of damage to your opponents life points. Hope that clears it up. I'll put this in the original post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 Oooooh! Then fix the effect. Here's what I would write: "The equipped monster can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. During the End Phase of the turn this card is equipped to a monster, deal 10 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points x the number of monsters in your Graveyard." Lol. Now that I fixed it, it seems to be massively underpowered. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 You're gonna want to make that a bit stronger. Like, 50-100 points for each monster. Dealing 300 damage is not worth dumping 30 monsters in the graveyard; I could use Blasting the Ruins to do 3000 for the same price. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monsta Masha Posted February 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 I have updated the original post and card with the OCG that xzMasteRzx provided (thanks again) giving credit to xzMasteRzx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 It's not that bad for a 1st. It would work well with zombies, especially with the Cemetary Bomb-related effect at the end. The pic fits in pretty well too. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 So, we have Nightmare Horse AND Cemetery Bomb? ... meh. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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