yugiohlover2 Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 please don't be too harsh. This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 water monsters in your graveyard from play. When this card is Special Summoned sucessfully it can attack 3 times during the same battle phase. image credit goes to: www.google.com/images Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FateTheSeer Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 kinda OPed but i like the idea 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohlover2 Posted February 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 kinda OPed but i like the idea 8/10 all i can say is i did my best. I can modify it if needed. I will lower the attack some. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dramatic Crossroad Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 1. Overpowered.2.Image is blurry/pixelised.3.Bad OCG, let me fix that :This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 WATER monsters in your Graveyard from play. This card gains 2 additional attacks during the turn it's Special Summoned.(not sure of the last sentence though). 4. Decent for a Newbie. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FateTheSeer Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 i know i dont rele like it when ppl r rele harsh especially on ppl who havent made many cards its rele annoying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 Image is blurry, it's ok 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dramatic Crossroad Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 I'm not being harsh. I'm trying to help this guy(or a girl , idk)There are lot of topics and OCG (official card grammar or something like that) that can help a lot of new and old members improve their card-making skills. It's not about making cards that everyone would like/hate. It's about sharing ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FateTheSeer Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 no i didnt mean to implicate that u were being harsh in fact your one of the ppl which isnt all that harsh ever in any post ive seen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohlover2 Posted February 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 OCG *fixed* btw i am a girl. and working on a better pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 OCG errors, pic is bad, I'd change it too 2600 ATK and 1900 DEF I'll correct your OCG for free [because you are a new member.][spoiler=Correct OCG]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand by removing 2 WATER monsters in your Graveyard from play. This card can attack twice in the Battle Phase of the turn that this card was Special Summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 The first card: A little overpowered, blurry pic... but for a starter, I'll start you off with 9/10! Great for a 1 star! The second card: Perfect OCG (someone fixed it for you) You could change the blurry pic. 10/10. Total: 19/10. Amazing work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zigzix Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 The first card: A little overpowered' date=' blurry pic... but for a starter, I'll start you off with 9/10! Great for a 1 star! The second card: Perfect OCG (someone fixed it for you) You could change the blurry pic. 10/10. Total: 19/10. Amazing work.[/quote']Is this because of your kindness to new members thread? Nonetheless, I agree with the above. The second version is a good card, not really OPed (shield and sword >:]) 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MCR Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 the picture haven't goog quality and where is the effect?6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 Good For A Noob.What I Think:5.9/10Noob Rating:7/10 :) (A Bit More Because It's First Card) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 Its good for a new noob in terms of the ocg but the pic is what lets the card down, you have potential. Normally i would rate this 5/10. but for someone new, i will rate it a 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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