Lelouch Lamperouge Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 [align=center]Card: Effect: This card cannot be Set. This card can only be Normal Summoned while "Toon World" is on your side of the field. You can Normal Summon this card but Tributes are required for monster Level 5 or more. This card cannot attack in the same turn it is Summoned. Unless you pay 500 Life Points, this monster cannot attack. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target.This card can only be Normal Summoned by sacrificing 3 monsters. If this card is Special Summoned, it will be destroyed during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Special Summoned. This card is unaffected by Trap cards. If this card is to be targetted by an effect of a Spell Card, this card returns to your field during the End Phase of the turn that this card has been selected as a Spell target. The original ATK and DEF of this card is the combined original ATK and DEF of the monsters that was used for the Tribute Summon.If this card is Destroyed By Battle then it becomes Sphere Mode(Atk/0Def/2000) if this card is in Sphere Mode for 3 Turns revert this monster back to normal,it's Atk and Def become whatever they were before it became Sphere Mode.If this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard it become Phoenix Mode,when this card becomes Phoenix Mode destroy all monsters your opponent controls you can sacrifice any number of your Lifepoints to do the same amount of Damage to your opponents Life Points. The Hard Work Of The Ocg Is In The Effect Part After The Card Pic So Pls Read Both. Watch Out For Slifer Toon Because Me And Dark Anarchist Made One So Soon There'll Be A Card Contest :)[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 no divine beasts in realistic. pm DjOsiris to move this to any other before he locks you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 no divine beasts in realistic. pm DjOsiris to move this to any other before he locks you. Or have me notice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 that works too... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted February 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 Pls Don't Lock Just Move, I Want To Know What People Thinnk :)Ok So It's Been Moved :) P.s. Pls Rate Ppl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 dont like it 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted February 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Why??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 [align=center]star level should be 10 :? :shock: the effect is so long that once i read it, i died... sorry i didn't understand the effect, but that's just me, I'm sure god cards attacks are like: X000 or just ? and some OCG errors: Opponents = opponent's LifePoints = Life Points Destroyed By Battle = destroyed by battle[/align] highlighted mistakesThis card cannot be Set. This card can only be Normal Summoned while "Toon World" is on your side of the field you control 1 face-up "Toon World". You can Normal Summon this card but Tributes are required for monster Level 5 or moreThis card can only be Normal Summoned by tributing monster that are Level 5 or more. This card cannot attack in the same turn it is Summoned. Unless you pay 500 Life Points, this monster cannot declare an attack. When "Toon World" is on the field isdestroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target.This card can only be Normal Summoned by sacrificing 3 monsters. If this card is Special Summoned, it will be destroyed during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Special Summoned. This card is unaffected by Trap cards. If this card is to be targetted by an effect of a Spell Card, this card returns to your field during the End Phase of the turn that this card has been selected as a Spell target. The original ATK and DEF of this card is the combined original ATK and DEF of the monsters that was used for the Tribute Summon.If this card is Destroyed By Battle then it becomes Sphere Mode(Atk/0Def/2000) if this card is in Sphere Mode for 3 Turns revert this monster back to normal,it's Atk and Def become whatever they were before it became Sphere Mode.If this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard it become Phoenix Mode,when this card becomes Phoenix Mode destroy all other monsters on Your Opponents Field your opponent controls you can sacrifice any number of your Life Points to do the same amount of Damage to your Opponentsopponent's Life Points. I Couldnt actually be bothered to do the rest :? i just woke up, the effects too long to fix, I'm not sure i did it right anyway, so... be happy. P.S.: Do not reply directly to this post, if you wish to contact me, do it via PM. Its the best to ensure a quick reply. I will help you with OCG or finding suitable images ;) Post locked ( no more edits ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<}Alpha Frogodile{> Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Dang, yujioooh, you made mistakes in corrections! The second edit you made is actually how toons have their effects written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 What happened to Mega-Ultra-Chicken?Now he looks more like Gigobyte XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted February 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Yujioooh:The Toon Part Of The Effect I Copied From A Toon Mermaid Card So How Could It Be Wrong.Thanks For Correction On Ra Effect.(*Goes Edits*)P.s. I Checked The Divine Effect Booklet Your Right Yujioooh Opponents Isn't Capitalized And The Your Opponent Controls Thing Is Correct To, I Posted That Effect On Memory I Hope There Aren't Any Other Errors *Checks* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zaka5 Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 sorry, the background=fail ..... out of 10!also the pic is not in good quality Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 That's cute...but thats all I can say about it. Don't like divine beasts... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Well it seems alright. But damn, yujioooh beat me to the errors. But the great Ra, a toon monster? But anyway, too many divine beast cards nowadays. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted February 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 Maybe, I'm Just Making Some Toon Gods Then I Won't Make Anymore Divine Beasts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 "rules over all that is mysticCartoonish"Fixed* Also, Make that change. It makes it more lulz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted February 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 I Would Change, But I'm Too Lazy.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyenajerk Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 not to good 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 I dont like God cards, and it should be LV 10 and not 12 so you get 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 OMG! Big effect. tl;dr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 It's not as bad as people are saying!All errors have been stated!I dislike background pic!To yujioooh;-Obelisk's ATK & DEF : 4000-Slifer's ATK & DEF : X000-Ra's ATK & DEF : ???? Normal monsters have a ? but Ra has ???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SoulSnatcher Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 lol dat card looks funny, you shud make a card called God of Comedian Book Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted February 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 not to good 3/10Who Are You??Why 3/10?You Probably Don't Even Know You Just Wanna Sound Cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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