MarkKetron Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 lol I made a cheap DarkSuperSonic XD so unstoppable it aint funny. hes like an endgame card. but he still a wee bit fair. hope u can read his effecys in case u cant they are1.when this card is destroyed by battle special summon one sonic the hedgehog from your deck or graveyard.2.for every card with sonic in its name in your graveyard increase this cards atk and def by 500.3.thi card cannot stay in play longer than 5 of your turns.4.this card is immune to all spells, traps, and monster effects, and can only be destroyed by super sonic, super shadow, or dark super sonic. lol uber cheapness XD the 5 turn limit is the fairness ha ha and the fact that he only has 6000 attack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Bad pic and Bad Effect.Bad/10Did I mention it was bad? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 [align=center]OP bad pic bad OCG bad card overall, read the PM i sent you ;) BTW, i can tell you have never played yugioh before or seen a card before in your life, because you label the effects in number order? that is non existant and has never happened... if you are going to make ayugioh card, actually have some background information first. cant be destroyed for 5 turns, has 6000 ATK and gains an extra 500 for sonic cards, really OP, its disgusting to have seen this card :shock: :cry:[/align] P.S.: Do not reply directly to this post, if you wish to contact me, do it via PM. Its the best to ensure a quick reply. I will help you with OCG or finding suitable images ;) Post locked ( no more edits ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkKetron Posted February 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Lol, dude I have played yugi-oh before. This is my first time on website and I am very good at yugi-oh have a deck that destroys. This is just my first card. No one is perfect =P some people get it right the first time and some people need practice besides, its dark super sonic we're talking about. He's on crack anyway no matter how you put it XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shradow Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Wow... I can't really top yujiooh, so I'll just say, go with what he says. He always has the best criticism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Wow... I can't really top yujiooh' date=' so I'll just say, go with what he says. He always has the best criticism.[/quote'] He just states common sense.It's not awesome, but at least it's decent. lol, if you had played Yu-gi-oh with a deck that "Pwns" then you should know the Card Grammar at least. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkKetron Posted February 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 lol like I said its my first time here makin cards so im just tryin to get used to how everythings works before I get down to the serious stuff. And here is this lightened up enough for you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 [align=center]I think this card is terrible because: Name: it has no spaces. Stars: too high, god cards are 10 stars, make it about 7 or 8, maybe 9 if the effect is complicated. ATK: WTF? seriously? No card has ever got that high without a good effect to lower it. DEF: see ATK. Type: hedgehog doesn't exist. beast warrior works. Effect: you have numbered it, that makes no sense? OCG fix:When this card is destroyed by battle Special Summon 1 "Sonic the Hedgehog" from your Deck or Graveyard. For each card in your Graveyard with "Sonic" in their names this cards ATK and DEF is increased by 500. This card is destroyed during your 5th Standby Phase after it is Summoned. This card is unaffected by Spell, Trap, and Monster Effect. This card can only be destroyed by "Super Sonic", "Super Shadow", or "Dark Super Sonic". That is all i can do for now, right now I'm busy doing some image editing, if you want an alternative version to this then do the following: Post the image location below, and i will remake this card.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkKetron Posted February 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Lol, well lets see you told me earlier I havent played yugi-oh so obviously u havent seen sonic in his dark form. He would deserve 12 stars I believe and excuse me for not have perfect grammer the first time, u could be a bit nicer wen I repost to ask instead of sayin THIS CARD IS TERRIBLE, and if I put spaces name might not fit, and also sonic is a hedgehog not a beast warrior. I know wat u were suggesting with the beast warrior thing but it just doesnt mix. Besides this isnt and official yugi-oh card so I don't think it matters. And did u not read the title of this thread to begin with? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 [align=center]the name will if its not a yugioh card dont post it i read the title, it really is a cheap excuse for a card. you cant have played yugioh being as you dont know basic OCG and how to put effects, no such thing as: Effect 1: kill a monsterEffect 2: this card is invincibl. Okay, simple...[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D. Gray Man Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 ahhh bad pic bad ocg ^_^1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkKetron Posted February 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 wow, sonic haters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shradow Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 No, I love Sonic, he's one of my best in SSBB. (I try to use him not cheaply) He's awesome, (but not as awesome as Kirby and Ike) but your card, not so much... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 wow' date=' sonic haters[/quote'] No.Sonic is decent.You just kill Sonic and everything he stood up for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 well i hate sonic because he sucks, its a blue hedgehog that runs fast, big whoop. anyway, i have already done 3 lengthy comments above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkKetron Posted February 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Umm, no, Im a sonic spaz. I have everything sonic, my computer is filled with sonic stuff I have all his comics u could say im obsessed. I just believe that Dark Super Sonic should be overpowered because well go to newgrounds and watch Nazo Unleashed u Noob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Umm' date=' no, Im a sonic spaz. I have everything sonic, my computer is filled with sonic stuff I have all his comics u could say im obsessed. I just believe that Dark Super Sonic should be overpowered because well go to newgrounds and watch Nazo Unleashed u Noob[/quote'] XDThe noob speaks like a noob.The best you could've done was make it SARCASTIC.[sarcasm FTW/] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 anybody who likes sonic is a little 9 year old kid abandoned by society, has no friends and spikes his hair up to look like sonic, simple, i am speaking from experience.here: use this image for your card, i just made it [align=center]When this card is destroyed by battle Special Summon 1 "Sonic the Hedgehog" from your Deck or Graveyard. For each card in your Graveyard with "Sonic" in their names this cards ATK and DEF is increased by 500. This card is destroyed during your 5th Standby Phase after it is Summoned. This card is unaffected by Spell, Trap, and Monster Effect. This card can only be destroyed by "Super Sonic", "Super Shadow", or "Dark Super Sonic". DOES THAT LOOK BETTER THAN YOURS? thought so...[/align]The main reason for making this version of your original is to show you, that you can make a card fair, all i have done is changed the stats, it has the same effect. exactly the same, i have just balanced it for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shradow Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 That looks a lot better. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Many capitilisation errors such as Special Summon. Image could be better and could use a background. ATK and DEF needs to be lowered. Also, yujioooh owns this thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 woohoo [/topic] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkKetron Posted February 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 Bad pic and Bad Effect.Bad/10Did I mention it was bad? Heres my late reply to this so you will know my future response to all negative comments XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 MarkKetron, your immaturity knows no bounds. BTW, the "card" you just posted belongs in the "Joke Card" thread, not in here. And learn to make decent cards next time. yugioooh is 20x better than you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkKetron Posted February 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 MarkKetron' date=' your immaturity knows no bounds. BTW, the "card" you just posted belongs in the "Joke Card" thread, not in here. And learn to make decent cards next time. yugioooh is 20x better than you.[/quote'] REPLY IS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted February 17, 2009 Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 You're only proving my point further by replying with immature comments. I also realised that even when a respected user gives you advice, you completely block him/her, leaving you with not learning how to do things right. Good luck with self-improving yourself in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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