Lyfe. Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 [align=center]Just live life the way you want to.Did you ever think that todayIs the last time you'll ever get to live it?In your life?I doubt that most people live life to the fullest.If they did, people wouldn't kill themselves.They wouldn't feel depressed.What are you going to do with your life? Are you just gonna sit thereAnd wait until your day comes to "move on"?That's a bad idea.There are things that make you happyAnd that make you feel like your living lifeThey way you want to.So go do something you love.You don't have forever.[/align] -Ricochet28-Ricochet28 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 wow that is awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 Thanks ^^ I just had this urge inside to write something "inspiring", so I did. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 OH MY GOD HE INVENTED THE ENTIRELY NEW AND EXCITING CONCEPT OF CARPE DIAM AND EXPRESSED IN AN ORIGINAL AVANTE-GARDE MANNERE!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 liek der r beter waiz 2 du dat butt u got it, kinda Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 So to sum up:Do stuff you like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sartorius Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 I do words too. Roses are red.Violets are blue. I'll sex you with a rake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 Oh my...TMI Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 I do words too. Roses are red.Violets are blue. I'll sex you with a rake. [/thread] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 Ehh, I have a problem. Whose post is better, Crab Helmet or Sartorius or the thread starter's? That was a fail poem/song/story/wordz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.arx Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 I have better words than that: Roses are red, Violets are blue,You smell like garbage,I don't like you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 I have better words than that: Roses are red' date=' Violets are blue,You smell like garbage,I don't like you.[/quote'] *tear* Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! *Stands and applauds* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbamber Posted February 19, 2009 Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 That was very good. I loved it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted February 19, 2009 Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 I only like poems with rhymes and has a good rhythm. But this one is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted February 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 Thank you all for your kind words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
「tea.leaf」 Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 Horrifically boring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted February 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 Really? As boring as your Avy? Lol jk, your avy is pretty kewl XD Really you think so? Ok... Anyway, anyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
「tea.leaf」 Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 Really? As boring as your Avy? Lol jk' date=' your avy is pretty kewl XD Really you think so? Ok... Anyway, anyone else?[/quote'] You did not just dis Aeris. :'‹ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 tl;dr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 while your poem does not rhyme, it doesn't have to. Personally I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted February 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 tl;dr??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 tl;dr??? too long; didn't read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 tl;dr 16 lines is too much for you to read? There are plenty of poems longer than that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 tl;dr 16 lines is too much for you to read? There are plenty of poems longer than that Yeah, but then you need to factor in the crushing cliche exponent and the boringosity multiplier, and it comes out to 768 lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 tl;dr 16 lines is too much for you to read? There are plenty of poems longer than that Yeah' date=' but then you need to factor in the crushing cliche exponent and the boringosity multiplier, and it comes out to 768 lines.[/quote'] that varies from person to person, but fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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