first try

[ventyren]

hey all tell me what you think of this its the first one i have ever made so please be kind

 

 

[-Berserker-]

Need help with OCG. Something like:

Equip this card to a Spellcaster-type monster you control. The equipped monster cannot be destroyed (by battle, or by card effects; don't use both or it will be overpowered). When the equipped monster is selected as an attack target, increase that monster's ATK by 500.

[ventyren]

thanks im still trying to get the wording right

[Shiranui]

Try:

 

This card can only be equipped to a Spellcaster-Type monster you control. The monster equipped with this card cannot be destroyed by card effects. Each time the monster equipped with this card is attacked, increase its ATK by 500.

 

Try adding a down side such as: discard 1 Spell Card. If you cannot, this card is destroyed.

[ventyren]

second card what do you think

 

 

[metalflygon08]

Just a few OCG errors, and spelling

try:

[Fairy/Effect]

"This monster can not be Normal Summoned or Set, this monster can only be Special Summoned from the Graveyard."

 

overall an ok card, good power but a tad bit of a sucky limiting effect, though a side effect would be nice somthing like: "Once per turn you may tribute 1 Fairy-type monster to destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field." (oh and try to stay away from DIVINE cards try Light it's awfully close and all DIVINEs have 10 stars, this could be an 8 or 9 if it were Light)