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Is it too small?? if it is click on picture then comment :)

 

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1 Tuner + 1 or more Non Tuner(s)

 

Once per turn you can draw 5 cards, if one of those cards are DARK with a level 10 or lower you can sommen it or all of the dark cards. Each DARK Card On the field gains 2000 attack and defence this card gains ALL the DARK card(s) attack and defence. Your opponet cannot target this card with spell or traps.

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for now i will just comment on the effect

 

you don't have to put a (s) at the end because you already said 1 or more.

 

it is also WAY too overpowered,i will just fix the OCG first:

Once per turn, you can draw 5 cards.If one of the drawn cards is a Level 10 or lower DARK monster,you can Special Summon that card or all DARK monsters in your hand.All Face-up DARK monsters gain 2000 ATK and DEF. Increase this cards ATK and DEF by the combined total of the ATK and DEF of all face-up DARK monsters on the field (Except NAME HERE). This card cannot be targeted by Spell or Trap cards.

 

way to not OP it:

* Remove the draw 5 effect and the Special Summon effect

* Remove all DARKs gain 2000 ATK and DEF effect

* Remove combined ATK effect

 

then add some more new,more creative effects to it.

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