~Shore Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 mehfirst time using multiple rendersv2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doomboi Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 Nice but you should play with the opacity on the soap bubbles. Fifty or fourty will probably make it better and that live bubbles should be under the soap bubbles. Other than that it's great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted February 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 OK thanks I'll try that some time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D. Gray Man Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 good job XD 8/10 but try to mess with the effects like overlay etc.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 Doesn't seem to focus on Bubbles since she is all the way on the right. One of your better though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted February 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 thanksand that was on purpose I like her over there, her pose+ the soap bubbles didn't seem to fit in the center. but I'll experiment with different positions in v2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 Multiple focals are never a good idea....the eye never knows where to look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Jono Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 Those bubbles look like a C4D and they don't blend with the background. The character Bubbles doesn't blend either and the background doesn't work to well with the C4D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 The bubbles are C4Ds. I've seen them before. Also what Blood Rose said, dont have 2 focals. It ruins the sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted February 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 watch my amazing n00bishness[spoiler=Amazing N00bishness]what's a focal? and I actually used c4ds 0.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 A focal is like what the sig is focused on. The render is 97% of the tiem the focal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted February 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 OK, so whats the second focal in my tag? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted February 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 sorry for double post, but I looked at the criticism for the tag and re-made it. there are things about it I like, and things about it I dislike. I'm gonna try editing the first one next since I kind of like the look and colors of it better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 Is it me or did the render just get less quality? Anyways, I think you improved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted February 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 the lack of yellow elsewhere in the sig makes the color look duller on the render, which I dislike. also, I liberally overlayed some of the c4ds on the render, so that could make it look a bit lower quality, which was unintentional Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted February 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 bump I'm really trying to improve I want some cnc on v2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 Now all it is, is a C4D as the background and a render pasted on it. The other on was better. Read so tuts. A really good site for that is Gimptalk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted February 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 I have photoshop =/but before I read tuts I gotta know how to do the things in tuts. does gimptalk tell u what a gradient map is or how to use good c4ds? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 Ok then go find PS tuts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom™ Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 Meh, I don't like it... But v1 is probly better. gradient map is or how to use good c4ds? For C4D's: http://www.gimptalk.com/forum/the-hitchhiker%CA%B9s-guide-to-c4ds%C7%83-t37839.html For Gradient maps, umm... In GIMP it's Colors > Map > Gradient Map. Maybe PS is same though. Just remember to have the colors you want to be GMed, if you have Black and White and you want Yellow and red, then change the colors, cause if you GM it would be B&W. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Jono Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 The second is just copypasta. C4D's repeated and Bubbles added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted February 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 yeah, its like that except with resize and opacity adjustments :?Meh' date=' I don't like it... But v1 is probly better. gradient map is or how to use good c4ds? For C4D's: http://www.gimptalk.com/forum/the-hitchhiker%CA%B9s-guide-to-c4ds%C7%83-t37839.html For Gradient maps, umm... In GIMP it's Colors > Map > Gradient Map. Maybe PS is same though. Just remember to have the colors you want to be GMed, if you have Black and White and you want Yellow and red, then change the colors, cause if you GM it would be B&W.thank you ^_^ now I can try some tuts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 Meh' date=' I don't like it... But v1 is probly better. gradient map is or how to use good c4ds? For C4D's: http://www.gimptalk.com/forum/the-hitchhiker%CA%B9s-guide-to-c4ds%C7%83-t37839.html For Gradient maps, umm... In GIMP it's Colors > Map > Gradient Map. Maybe PS is same though. Just remember to have the colors you want to be GMed, if you have Black and White and you want Yellow and red, then change the colors, cause if you GM it would be B&W. In Photoshop it's Layers > New Adjustment Layer > Gradient MapEdit: Or just click the little black/white circle in the layers panel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted February 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 thanks. I was trying to do stuff in photoshop but like on that c4d tut I was shown I couldn't figure out how to get rid of the black BG cuz I couldn't find the menus that I was supposed to use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasu Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 No bleedingNo DepthAnd no... multiple focals... are bad Dx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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