Morgan LeFlay Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 Hello, welcome to my 2nd contest. The rules of this contest are as follows: You are to design 1 Monster Card. The only restriction it has is that its level must match the number of stars represented by your post count. So, if you are a level 2 member, you make a level 2 monster. That simple. There will be no entry fee. The prizes are as follows: 1st: 4 reps, 100 points.2nd: 2 reps, 50 points.3rd: 25 points. All results will be graded and posted using the following rubric: Originality: 25Balance: 25OCG: 20Pic: 15Personal opinion: 15 Total / 100 Entry will last until the end of the month, please post your cards before then. All entrants will be accepted, and you can continue to post cards until the results are posted. Results: OCG fix: [spoiler=Lord_Charmander 85/100]Originality: 25/25Balance: 25/25OCG: 12/20Pic: 8/15Personal opinion: 15/15 Also on another note the actual wording of the card was pretty good, but I would word it a bit differently since effects always assume "you" are the controller, so if the opponent is the new controller of this card then you would be the opponent.OCG fix of your old wording:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When this card is destroyed by battle, instead of sending this card to the Graveyard, place this card face-up on your opponent's side of the field. As long as this card remains face-up on your opponent's side of the field, inflict 400 points of damage to his/her Life Points each Standby Phase (or, if not, specify which part of the turn). Your opponent cannot change the battle position of this card.How it probably should be worded: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When this card is destroyed by battle, instead of sending this card to the Graveyard, place this card face-up on your opponent's side of the field. Then, it gains the following effect: •During each Standby Phase, take 400 damage. You cannot change the Battle Position of this card. [spoiler=Batteryman AAA 66/100]Far Beyond InvestigationOriginality: 20/25Balance: 25/25OCG: 17/20Pic: 4/15 (-3 for no image credit. Also.. animeish and not really Yugioh-style)Personal opinion: 8/15 (I also don't think its name is fitting for a monster) OCG Fix: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it treated as an Effect Monster with the following effect:* This card is treated as a Tuner monster while face-up on the field. All Tuner monsters you control gain 350 (space inserted here) ATK. [spoiler=rodri666 55/100]Originality: 23/25Balance: 0/25 (It can be abused by Card of Safe Return, because unfortunately you allowed it to summon itself multiple times per End Phase. That is a shame too because otherwise this card was pretty good.)OCG: 18/20Pic: 4/15 (-3 for no image credit)Personal opinion: 10/15 OCG fix: You can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard during your End Phase while there are 3 or more Warrior-Type monsters in your Graveyard. If you Special Summon this monster by that way, destroy it if is the only Warrior-Type monster on the field. When this card is Special Summoned from your Graveyard by this effect, it can attack twice during the Battle Phase. If this card was Special Summoned from your hand by this effect, you can Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type or DARK monster from your hand. [spoiler=The Godslayer 52/100]Clen, Caretaker of Infernal Souls]Originality: 15/25Balance: 15/25 (It's hard to give a proper rating wnen I don't know which Graveyard or Graveyards you are referring to.)OCG: 12/20Pic: 2/15 (-3 for no image credit)Personal opinion: 8/15 OCG fix: This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for each monster in the Graveyard. If this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict 200 points of direct damage to your opponent's Life Points. If this card is removed from the field, remove fom play all monster's in both players' Graveyards. Instead of saying the Graveyard it should say your Graveyard, your opponent's Graveyard, or both players' Graveyards. [spoiler=kingkobra 43.5/100]Originality: 12.5/25Balance: 10/25 (This may be easy to be abused by your opponent, but being able to summon ANY monster is a bit much.)OCG: 5/20Pic: 8/15Personal opinion: 8/15 OCG fix: This card cannot be Set or changed to Defense Position. When this card battles a monster, double the ATK of the monster it is battling until the end of the Damage Step. If you take 3000 or more damage from a battle involving this monster, Special Summon 1 of your monsters that has been removed from play or in your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. [spoiler=Nitemare452 41/100]Originality: 10/25Balance: 15/25 (To be honest a bit underpowered and there are better options)OCG: 8/20Pic: 4/15 (-3 for no image credit)Personal opinion: 4/15 OCG fix: This card gains (ATK? DEF? ATK and DEF?) for each monster that has been removed from play. When this card is removed from the field, remove it from play. [spoiler=.:True Destiny:. 37.5/100]Originality: 10/25Balance: 10/25 (With the current wording, it's horrible overpowered and will be at 3000 ATK by your next turn. You need to specify whether it';s only your turn or both player's turns, and also what phase this occurs in.)OCG: 8/20Pic: 4.5/15 (-3 for more image credit. Also this score might have been a bit higher if it had a full background)Personal opinion: 5/15 OCG fix:Once per turn, during phase, you can pay 500 Life Points. If you do, this card gains 400 ATK. If you do not, this card loses 400 ATK. [spoiler=]Originality: 25Balance: 25OCG: 20Pic: 15Personal opinion: 15 OCG fix: legendarylighting I am not going to rate your card because I don't know what your equip card does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 Entry reserved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 Creative contest, entry reserved. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan LeFlay Posted February 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 Okay, both in, need more people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 :: entry reserved :: so we can make more than 1 card ? ( hope not ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 ~entry reserved~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rise of the Eldrazi Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 in. mah card iz This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for each monster in the Graveyard. If this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, inflict 200 points of direct damage to your opponent's Life Points. If this card is removed from the field, remove fom play all monster's in both player's Graveyards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dramatic Crossroad Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 I'll join the fun!!![spoiler=Card Lore]This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it treated as an Effect Monster with the following effect:* This card is treated as a Tuner Monster while face-up on the field. All Tuner Monsters you control gain 350ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan LeFlay Posted February 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 nope, DevilQ8, just 1 :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1337noob Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 reserved Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitemare452 Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Im in and here's mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ιϻϻσяταᴌ Ωϻεϛα Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 I'll Join. Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When this card is destroyed by battle, instead of sending this card to the Graveyard, place this card face-up on your opponent's side of the field. As long as this card remains face-up on your opponent's side of the field, inflict 400 points of damage to his/her Life Points each turn. Your opponent cannot change the Battle Position of this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
六兆年と一夜物語 Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 My card (i'll join) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingkobra Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Ill join img citation:Duy Huynh - New WorksMarch 18, 2008 by larkandkey accessed from Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rodri666 Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Good idea, i enter. Here is my card:[spoiler=Effect]You can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard during your End Phase while there is 3 or more Warrior-Type monsters in your Graveyard. If you Special Summon this monster by that way, destroy it if is the only Warrior-Type monster on the field. When this card was Special Summoned from your Graveyard by this effect, it can attack twice during the Battle Phase. If this card was Special Summoned from your hand by this effect, you can Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type or DARK monster from your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Dang you stole my idea, lol.*Entry Reserved* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Here is my card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EnterTheRandomHero Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Hey count me in for this contest. Here is my entry. Effect: This card can be Special Summoned from your Deck by removing 2 EARTH monsters from your Graveyard. If you do, remove this card from play when it is removed from the field. When this card is used for a Synchro Summon, you can Special Summon 1 EARTH monster from your Deck or Graveyard with a Level less than or equal to half of the summoned Synchro Monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Golden Chaos Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Entry resreved.Creative as always Karl! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1337noob Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 heres my card:This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by battle with a Level 7 or lower monster. When this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned, increase the ATK and DEF of this card x400 for every card in your Graveyard that turn. During each player's Standby Phase, decrease the ATK and DEF of this card x200. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, inflict Life Points equal to the half the amount of ATK to your Life Points.image credit: http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj32/rainbowluv_/1d66.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 Quick question, if my level changes before I post my card do I post a level 3 or level 4 card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan LeFlay Posted February 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 Normally it's what level you are when your card is posted. But if you reserve early then it could go either way. I don't think you have to worry about reaching 400 posts though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 [spoiler= Lore] Each time this card destroys a monster by battle, place 1 Slaughter Counter on this card. When this card destroys a monster by battle inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of Slaughter Counters on this card x500. You can remove 1 Slaughter Counter from this card during either players turn to return this card to your hand. this card cannot attack your opponent directly if you control other face-up cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zigzix Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 ~Reserved~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 Normally it's what level you are when your card is posted. But if you reserve early then it could go either way. I don't think you have to worry about reaching 400 posts though.Ok thanks. (Yeah I doubt i'll be level four by then, but I was just wondering.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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