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Kakashi and Obito


9TailedHero

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I clicked on all the links, just because I am such a Kakashi fan, and read the story with Obito and young Kakashi. A very touching story. But that's beside the point. Your cards have very interesting effects, but your OCG (Official Card GrammAr) suffers. The point is to try to make it seem like an official card by wording it like one. Pictures are very blurry. You could do better with those. But then again, its hard to find Obito at all, let alone in color. Obito is very overpowered. Remember, he's the misfit ninja who at first couldn't do anything right. You should modulate that into his effect, like he could start out 1500/1000, but his effect could be, " if a card you control with "Kakashi" in its name is destroyed, this card gains 900 ATK and 1000 DEF." Glad to see you're NOT using fake types. Most newbies do. And no vanillas either. Also, this is optional, but you should try to use long, flowing, dramatic names.

(Ex. Instead of "Superman", "Superman, the Man of Steel".)

 

3.4/10 Keep trying.


P.S. Attachments are bad. Go to Q+A, it should have many articles telling you how to load cards correctly.

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