Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 I'd like to request that the mods lock/remove my other post with the same title. So, the thought came to me this morning, my fan-fic is coming along great, and so are the cards that are introduced in the Fan-Fic, the "Daedalus" Monsters. I thought the first time I posted my cards, I was posting them because I had nothing better to do, and also it was my first time. They were pretty lame, so I revamped them and made them better (maybe, that's where you generous folk come in). There are some recognizable monsters in here from the last post, but there are also some new ones as well. Some effects have been changed, some cards have retained their old effects, but I find this set to be much better than the old one. P.S. It's also my first crack at the new OCG, since I need to get with the times. [spoiler='Monsters'][img]http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/2667/374045k.jpg[/img] [img]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/1140/374045w.jpg[/img] [img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/7334/374045im.jpg[/img] [img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/5914/374045h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/3782/374045g.jpg[/img] [img]http://img546.imageshack.us/img546/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/7066/374045q.jpg[/img] [img]http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/8093/374045.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Spells/Traps'][img]http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/1140/374045w.jpg[/img] [img]http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/8498/374045e.jpg[/img] [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/1065/374045d.jpg[/img] [img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/3070/374045n.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Synchro Monsters'][img]http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/8498/374045e.jpg[/img] [img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/2923/374045x.jpg[/img] And this is the ace card.... [img]http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/8093/374045.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lvl1hero Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 additions to your previously done "Daedalus" set?... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 [quote name='lvl1hero' timestamp='1310971554' post='5365448'] additions to your previously done "Daedalus" set?... [/quote] If you want to call it that. I consider it more a revamp than anything else. I know you already commented on the first set, nothing much different in the second set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 Bringing Up My Post... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lvl1hero Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 ... hi... its me again... xP [u]OCG[/u] = [b]Great[/b]! [i]I'm not good with the new OCG. Most of the time i was like "what?"[/i] o_O [u]Images[/u] = [b]Good[/b] [i]Got some sexy lookin ladies eh![/i] xP [u]Comments[/u]: [u][b](1)[/b][/u] ... [b]Daedalus Warrior Angel Ranger's[/b] effect should say "[i][u]Once per turn[/u], by reducing[/i] ---"... otherwise its spammable... ... or you can say something like "[i]This card's effect can only be used twice per turn[/i]"... this way her [b]ATK[/b] doesn't hit some negative number (which shouldn't be possible)... ... though... i'm trying to think of a situation where her effect could be "cheap"... ... like say i have someone strong on the field (just one monster, lets use [b]Stardust Dragon[/b] o_O)... and you have like 3... ... and even though its only 3 monsters... those 3 can hit me directly doing massive damage... easy card to bypass things like strong monsters (since there aren't many common cards at all that negates something like what [b]Daedalus Warrior Angel Ranger[/b] does)... ... if you dont mind a suggestion... ... how about banishing both cards until the end phase?... -shrugs- ... just sounds more reasonable... and less cheap... [u][b](2)[/b][/u] ... i think [b]Daedalus Warrior Luminous Elf[/b] is too weak in either ([u]a[/u]) [b]DEF[/b] or ([u]b[/u]) that it increases too little Life Points per Main Phase... ... i think its okay to bump it up to like 300 Life Points... [u][b](3)[/b][/u] ... some cards that can attack again are kind've weak... i mean like when they get their [b]ATK[/b] lowered by their effect to allow them to attack again... some of the cards are like your [b]Daedalus Warrior Twin Heartblade[/b] and... ... (i guess its in your other set of cards)... [u][b](4)[/b][/u] ... [b]Commanding Presence[/b] and [b]Daedalus Paradise Reach[/b] are a nice set of cards to go together... =j [u][b](5)[/b][/u] ... why the last effect on [b]Cosmos Tide[/b]?... ... that... kinda sucks... (i'm saying it as if i was dueling and i drew this card) =( [u][b](6)[/b][/u] -[i]draws[/i] '"[b]Daedalus Destruction Prevention[/b]"- ... awesome!... ... now this is a nice card... ... and the last effect where you get a [b]Daedalus[/b] monster is not bad since [b]Daedalus[/b] monster's aren't that strong anyways... [u][b](7)[/b][/u] ... hmmm... ... you know for [b]Eye of the Heavens[/b]... [u]any[/u] [b]Daedalus[/b] monster includes synchro monsters as well... ... kind of OP... ... how about it special summons from the hand instead?... ... or... maybe a cost to summon from your graveyard?... like iono... 100 Life Points per level of the monster you want to bring back?... ... i'll let you decide... [u][b]([/b][/u] ... something tells me [b]Pentagramm Fire[/b] wont be sooooo... useful?... ... well i mean... since its gone after 3 turns... ... i just dont see this deck really syching fast enough to make use of [b]Pentagramm Fire[/b]... ... in other words... ... this card may very well end up being a dead draw... ... i think you can toss the 3 turns effect on the card... it'll be fine... [u][b](9)[/b][/u] ... i like [b]Daedalus Warrior Dread Scythe[/b]... ... pretty cool card there... ... and i [i]think[/i] [b]Daedalus Hero Excalibur[/b] is [i]kind've[/i] OP... ... but uhhh... ... i think its fine... [u]Overall Rating[/u]: [b]8.5/10[/b] [[i]Good cards and nice set here... its coming along very well[/i]] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShiningGodMan Posted July 22, 2011 Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 Awesome! OCG: 9/10 Images: 9/10 Balance: 10/10! Effects: 8/10 Overall: 36/40 or 9/10!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 bump, probably the last one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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