FairGamer Posted October 24, 2015 Report Share Posted October 24, 2015 I might have made this one a bit OP.. maybe not.. I dunno. If you think its overpowered blame this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5RbGZZnUR3g Kinda hyped :P Anyways, this is from my recent project "Paradise Lost" Archtype. (That place is dead.) If you liked this card make sure to check it out - http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/342528-way-back-to-the-eden-lost-paradise-lost-theme/ also part 2 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/343497-road-to-eden-lost-this-way-guys-part-2/Last Hope of Paradise Lost Rank 8Monster/LightXyz/Warrior/Effect2 Level 8 monsters(This card is always treated as "Utopia" monster.) This card can attack twice during each Battle Phase. If this card attacks, it is unaffected by other card effects until the end of the Damage Step. When this card declares attack first time: Halve the ATK of all face-up monsters your opponent controls. When this card attacks for the second time during the same Battle Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; double the ATK of this card. When this card is Xyz Summoned using a Tuner monster as any of its Materials: You can target 1 Spell card in your Graveyard; add it to your hand. feel free to comment and rate :) (Please?)I don't really know why, but I really wanted to make this one "Utopia" monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowsapex Posted October 24, 2015 Report Share Posted October 24, 2015 Actually, it seems rather underwhelming. 3 level 8s is a lot, and there isn't really anything significant that can survive 4k attack. Besides, it doesn't synergize with Utopia at all, and standalone, its going to be hard to get out 2 level 8s and Bird of Paradise Lost in order to Xyz. With your other archetype, it could be easier to summon, but not by much, and its effect still isn't really worth it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FairGamer Posted October 24, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2015 Yeah, guess you are right. I tried so hard not to make it overpowerd, in the end made it underpowered. I'll look into it. I'm thinking on reducing ATK but giving some ATK gain boost. Oh and Utopia its just name thing, wasnt meant to have synergy with utopia monsters, but I might try it now. Thanks again for commenting and if you have any suggestions, what and how to change feel free to comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thanatos-Zero Posted October 24, 2015 Report Share Posted October 24, 2015 I recommend to make the card summonable by using a Rank 5 or 6 Utopia Monster, with the limit that the monster cannot cause any battle damage the turn it is summoned. However we should take a look on Galaxy-Eyes Full Armored Photon Dragon as a reference, as such we should permit battle damage the turn it is xyz summoned using a Rank 5 or bigger Utopia Monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FairGamer Posted October 30, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2015 Ok so I updated it, reworked its effect fully. Now two swords make sense. I still dont know if its overpowered or underpowered. So comment and let me know what you think. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FairGamer Posted November 10, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2015 Reworked the effect again. 3rd is a charm. Probably this effect is more fun to play around. Make sure to comment and let me know what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FairGamer Posted November 12, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2015 bump of hope Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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