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The Night [A Hellsing Fanfic] Chapter 12 up!


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whatever riku, its up to kuja anyway

 

anyway Kuja you you need to fix something i just noticed after reading chapter 12 again. it's this first sentence.

 

As Dominic, Rena and Agas sat down next to Jack, Doarigan, Kevin, Dern and Cassandra were on their way out of the Hellsing Mansion.

 

i think you need to put a . in between jack and doarigan instead of the , cos it's kinda doesn't make sense if you know what i mean.

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Well maybe Doarigan was hidden deeper in the Hellsing mansion and was just recently discovered while Alucard was on a mission (ZOMG PLOT TWIST!)' date=' although he wouldn't be as powerful as Alucard.

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Epic plot twist is epic.

 

Chapter was pretty good tbh. Though I don't like it that Dom was mentioned with Steph. D:

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