Eternal Shadows ~Cryptid Fan Fic~ (Chapter 8 up! Character list up! Need Characters!

[Godot]

Lol, Still I know More Than you Fenrir. Anyone like may new Avy??

 

G&W FTW BABEH!

[ragnarok1945]

returning to the fic, I can't wait to see what they'll do to Dominic for this

[fenrir]

Not even close <_

[Godot]

For What?

[fenrir]

Your Cryptid prowess.

[Godot]

I have a Stinky Club for this Stuff!

[fenrir]

So?

 

That proves nothing.

[Godot]

True. I've Been Into this since I was 3!

[fenrir]

I wrote a fic about it.

 

Ha

[Fallen Hero]

Fenrir, the chapter was alright but it was a bit short. Hope it wasn't done this way because you felt forced into doing another chapter. If it was i'm sorry for asking a few times about it.

[Godot]

So That means Nothing.

[fenrir]

Fenrir' date=' the chapter was alright but it was a bit short. Hope it wasn't done this way because you felt forced into doing another chapter. If it was i'm sorry for asking a few times about it.

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It was really late when I typed it. I was tired.

[Fallen Hero]

well you shouldn't do that then, do it when you're ready to. Trust me it isn't good doing that, i got lucky with doing that with chapter 2 for my fic and when i did that i had been up for more than 30 hours.

[ragnarok1945]

Fenrir' date=' the chapter was alright but it was a bit short. Hope it wasn't done this way because you felt forced into doing another chapter. If it was i'm sorry for asking a few times about it.

[/quote']

 

It was really late when I typed it. I was tired.

 

Then can we please expect the next one slightly longer?

[Aelsthla-Mental]

Interesting story... Although it would be nice to have a little explanation of how this all began. Or is that for a later chapter? Or did I simply miss it?

 

Last chapter was short, but sometimes it's needed to keep your story alive hey?

 

Anyway, I'd like submit a character (if you are still taking)

 

[spoiler=Character]

Name: Ilario Ernesto

Age: 16

Short Bio: Born in Italy, Ilario was an average student at school. He was cheerful and nice, but seemed to enjoy fighting much more then was healthy. Always ready to get into a fight with people he disliked, he was suspended from school after giving a kid a concussion (he himself had a bloody nose, but the other wasn't blamed. Ilario had started it...). And it somewhat degenerated from there until he got into some serious trouble...

He is a bit immature, but also blunt when he doesn't like someone. Although usually quite cheerful. His main job is doing the chores, since he doesn't have the best temperament for a real job.

Appearance:

Reason for joining Eternal Shadows: They are the reason he isn't in prison, he feel's like he owes them (which he does :))

Position in team: Berserker (just keeps hitting/shooting, takes death or unconsciousness to stop him most of the time)

Relations with Characters:

Bruce: He respects him as a leader, although occasionally complains without any logical reason (e.g. "I don't like strategy meetings, they're BORING.")

Dominic: Ilario himself actually likes him for no well-founded reason. Likes to chat with him, even if he doesn't chat back.

Anemone: Likes her very much, though often questions her taste in music.

Giovan: Often Ilario pesters him with question after question, due to his massive curiosity.

Commander: Surprisingly quiet and respectful around him.

Voltaire: Enjoys looking and 'playing' with his high explosives, doesn't mind Voltaire himself, but not exactly 'best friends'.

Stephanie: Blatantly ignored most of the time, except when it comes to combat.

Blak: Always glances at him curiously, due to Blak's shifting nature

David: Indifferent, will talk to, respond to, but usually that's about it.

MODs: [spoiler=Tonfa's]

 

 

 

 

I took some liberties with it, tell me if it's a bit flawed or anything.

 

Well, good luck!

[Fallen Hero]

I think that might be explained on a later date of how it all began. Your character's weapon is a little farfetched with tonfas turning into twin pistols but that's just my opinion though. It's up to fenrir.

[Aelsthla-Mental]

I kinda based it on the fact how in the early chapter that guy turned his katana into a sniper (well, it was drawn from a sheath, but with mystical context), so perhaps I'm wrong. If I am, I suppose the tonfa's will do just fine. Heck, maybe even if the MOD's can do that I should stick with the tonfa's...

 

You are right though, pretty far fetched isn't it?

[Fallen Hero]

there wasn't a character who had a katana that can turn into a sniper. i think you accidently miss read something, dominic's got a katana and anemone has a sniper. if you want and this is an idea make him have bladed tonfas like kroenen off hellboy.

[Aelsthla-Mental]

Bah, good point, must have simply read what I wanted.

 

But i think I'll keep unbladed tonfa's. I prefer the character to have a blunt weapon.

[Fallen Hero]

ok just suggesting that's all. plus i now know i could have another character have that weapon or a different one that i like as well.

[Aelsthla-Mental]

Well, thanks for the suggestion, and stopping me before I embarrassed myself :)

 

Well, more so if the creator had to tell me anyway.

 

Yah, bladed tonfa's are pretty cool. I wish you luck if you want a character with that.

[Fallen Hero]

i've already got a character on this fic so unless he is still accepting character, i might have to wait for my other character to be killed off and have him replaced.

[Aelsthla-Mental]

LOL, not too much hope for your other character's survival?

 

...Nah, i see what you are getting at, it gets boring if no-one dies, and replacements do help.

 

Off Topic: Since when does it tell people how much cards we have created?

[Fallen Hero]

i don't know, i've just noticed it because you mentioned it but it can't have been that long ago though.

[fenrir]

Accepted.

 

I forgot to mention, but I <3 Tonfas.

 

I'm still accepting chars people.