NeriesUmbra Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 This just poped into my head hope you like it:) Here is the effect When you control only 1 face-up monster, you can pay 500 life points Special Summon this card from your hand in Attack Position. As long as you control another monster this card cannot be destroyed by battle or effect by Spell, Trap or Monster Cards. As long as you control this card, increase the ATK of each monster you control by 400. What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 I don't like. Simple as that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Whats rong with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Well starting with the effect as it is not that original. The pic need a background OCG needs work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Could you help me with the OCG then pleas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 When you control 1 face-up monster, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your hand in Attack Position. As long as you control another monster this card cannot be destroyed by battle or effect by Spell, Trap or Monster Cards. As long as you control this card, increase the ATK of each monster you control by 400. There it is, as this card is kinda OP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 I added a cost of 500 lp to summon and a restriction so it can only be special summond Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Well I fix'd the OCG also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Thank you areciate it:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 You forgot a p in the word >.> you also need to work on your spelling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 I am it just is not working to well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzumiyaandy Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 You Spelled "Nurse" wrong. Like X-31 said, It also needs a background and a less-confusing effect. Nice try, though. I give it a.... 4.5/10 in its current state. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Changed the speling of nurse, working on background and what part of this is to complicated so I can simplofy it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pipipa Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 couldnt someone have 2 neko nurses and itd be indurstructable? :x like just by using sangans and mystic tomatoes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card maker snobben Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Well its got almost the same effect as Freya, Spirit of victory.Well i give it a 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 While you control a face-up monster' date=' you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your hand in Attack Position. As long as you control 2 or more monsters this card cannot be destroyed by battle or by a card effect. Increase the ATK of all face-up monsters you control by 400. There it is, as this card is kinda OP.[/quote']Fix'd fix. couldnt someone have 2 neko nurses and itd be indurstructable? :x like just by using sangans and mystic tomatoesMagician's Valkyria.Marauding Captain.Command Knight.That one Deformer. This isn't news. @Card:OCG: 23; see my fix.PLY: 21; it's OP'd in stall. Get rid of the effect which states that the card cannot be destroyed by card effects.ORG: 16; see sleepy's post.RLG: 17; controlling multiple Neko Nurses is unbreakable stall. Incredibly OP'd with Final Countdown.CSM: 9; incorrect set ID, compressed/BG-less image... Final Judgment: 30.448% Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 OCG errors, nice pic tough! Unoriginal effect! 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted March 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2009 bump X5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted March 19, 2009 Report Share Posted March 19, 2009 First Error:Beast/Warrior = Wrong!Beast-Warrior = Right!(have a cookie) Now, lets analyse why this card is overpowered by comparing it with a Secret Rare Card. Shall we ;) :-your card is a Beast-Type, so you can call the 2 copies from your Deck with Rescue Cat. Its a DARK monster, helping the most overpowered Attribute in existense (DAD, Twilight, Chaos). Also, you don't need Rescue Cat to have this card instantly, any searcher will do, and by 500 points, you will be able to Special Summon it from your hand. WOOOW!!! and it doesn't have to be for DARK Decks, its highly splashable. -The card I posted is Level 1, your card is Level 3 (easier to conect Synchros with.- My card is for Fairy-Type monsters only. Your card is for all monsters you control in general.-My card cannot make a barrier by having it twice on the field. your card CAN do it.-My card only semi stops Attacks. your card cannot be attaked AND cannot be destroyed by effects either.. the only ways are by removing it from play(not everyone runs the shadow monarch), by returning to hand(not everyone has a grandmole. I don't like it), returning it to the Deck(storm monarch and phoenix's wing wind blast, which I don't see in every Deck) and controling (enemy controler & brain control, finally. something I see more in a regular basis.)... still, this is ULTIMATE STALL until the opponent draws some of the above card (If haven't used them already in the duel) if the opponent has them at all.. meanwhile you are going to focus on damaging your opponent with the rest of your cards while he/she strugles to take the 2 copies of this card to the graveyard..and while he/she does that, all your monsters have a +800 ATK boost.. you are a good member but this is seriously unfair :( , hope anything I have said might help you get ideas to balanse this card more... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pitchblack64 Posted March 19, 2009 Report Share Posted March 19, 2009 not bad not exactly unique but really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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