--[[Gallant Souls]]-- { Character Bios Posted}

[Chaos Impact™]

Welcome!! To Galland Souls a story about those who are gifted! This story will send us all over the world and being told the same story from the eyes of many different characters, all with special powers.

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[spoiler= Tate Longford "Click To View"]

Name: Tate Longford

Age: 14

Power: Unknown

Bio: Tate is from a wealthy family who live in the upper area of london, he is a twin and was given Vitimin X when he was four ten years ago with his sister. He has not developed an "Imperfection" yet..

 

 

 

 

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Book One- Alliences Started 19-03-2009

Prologue- Posted 19-03-2009

 

 

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When scientists invented a drug to cure all diseases, it created world wide excitiment. They called it Vitimin X, and it was issued to every child in the world with the age of 0-5 years. But after about a year some of the test subjects who were adults started to develop powers at first people though it was great until some people got bad powers that could hurt people so it was issued as a law that all people with thease powers would be banished to the lower slums of the area they were in. Now there is a 50% chance of getting powers and our main character is going up for a check up..

 

 

[Weather Report - Stand]

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When scientists invented a drug to cure all diseases, it created world wide excitiment. They called it Vitimin X, and it was issued to every child in the world with the age of 0-5 years. But after about a year some of the test subjects who were adults started to develop powers at first people though it was great until some people got bad powers that could hurt people so it was issued as a law that all people with thease powers would be banished to the lower slums of the area they were in. Now there is a 50% chance of getting powers and our main character is going up for a check up..

 

 

I'd like to see this story done in a memorable way, but first you may want to check your grammar.Vitamin' and 'excitement' are spelled incorrectly,and you made a run-on sentence. Now, I really want to read it, but you've gotta really reel me in! GO TO IT!!:D