Yankee Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Well, here we go again, another card by me, Yankeefan =D Today, I bring you my attempt at a monarch. Not exactly a lot to say here. Just read and comment please. [align=center][spoiler=Lyza the Gale Monarch] [spoiler=Effect]When this card is Summoned, you can search your Deck for a "Monarch" card and add it to your hand. If this card is used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon, put this card face-up in your Deck and shuffle it. When you draw this face-up card, you can Special Summon it to treat 1 face-up "Monarch" monster you control (except this card) as having been Tribute Summoned and activate its appropriate effect. [/align] [spoiler=Notes]If you notice, it's a woman. Yes, I made a female monarch. Got a problem with that? XDAlso,Thanks for the help Browarod ///_^ Cheers,Yankeefan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 It's not really similar to Monarchs in any way, aside from the 1000 DEF part. If you were attempting to make a Monarch Support Card, you shouldn't have named it "_ the _ Monarch". You should have named it "Monarch Empress" or something along those lines. When this card is Summoned, you can add 1 "Monarch" card from your Deck to your hand. place (not put) Those are the only OCG Errors I noticed. It's not a bad card, though. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Underpowered actually =/ To get it's last effect, you need to wait until you draw it from your Deck =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 It's not that useful, Yankee, and you also committed a lore mistake. There should be no apostrophe in "its", since you're not saying "it is". Nice to see you're still around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Thanks for the posts.Nice to see ya again Cyber, where ya been? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Oh, busy here and there. Managing my online Dueling website, mainly, and dabbling with various RPGs and fanfictions. Also, my French has improved tremendously. You? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 o.oDueling site? PM me =D And I've been makin' cards, lolz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Well this is cool, it is a girl O.o you should make a whole set of women monarches. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 No. He really shouldn't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 No. He really shouldn't. This. This card is mediocre. It's not a Monarch by any standard other than its DEF of 1000. It's a Monarch support card. The effect is an attempt to support the Monarch theme, but it lacks a way to jump out of the Deck. I had a phase where I was using Pharaoh's Treasure as a means of recursion for cards I wanted back. It didn't work because I'd never draw it after it was shuffled in. This would easily suffer a similar fate. By the time you draw it again, you will more than definitely not have a Monarch on the field to activate the effect of. The first effect is crazy broken since it can be Special Summoned to get a Monarch for free Tribute fodder. You didn't make a Monarch that supports Monarchs, you made an Elemental Hero Stratos that supports Monarchs. >_> The picture is shiny, though. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 Well this is cool' date=' it is a girl O.o you should make a whole set of women monarches.[/quote']lol No. He really shouldn't.Meh No. He really shouldn't. This. This card is mediocre. It's not a Monarch by any standard other than its DEF of 1000. It's a Monarch support card. The effect is an attempt to support the Monarch theme' date=' but it lacks a way to jump out of the Deck. I had a phase where I was using Pharaoh's Treasure as a means of recursion for cards I wanted back. It didn't work because I'd never draw it after it was shuffled in. This would easily suffer a similar fate. By the time you draw it again, you will more than definitely not have a Monarch on the field to activate the effect of. The first effect is crazy broken since it can be Special Summoned to get a Monarch for free Tribute fodder. You didn't make a Monarch that supports Monarchs, you made an Elemental Hero Stratos that supports Monarchs. >_> The picture is shiny, though. 6/10.[/quote'] Thanks for the post ///_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 Maybe it should be 6 Stars like the rest, but then again, a Level 4 is something nice to even it out. =DNice effect, excellent Support, good job. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 Thanks alot for the post ///_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1337noob Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 seems like monarch support, nice card, several OCG errors as pointed out above. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 Awesome image, innovative effect concept, I spot little or no OCG errors, so basically this card is almost flawless. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 Thanks for the posts ///_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
____pi____ Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 well i think that it's pretty good with few weired parts and isn't there already a wind monarch? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 Yes, Raiza the Storm Monarch. Thanks for the post ///_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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