Guest KAJN Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 [align=center]"Hello, It's been a long time since I posted anything in this section so I thought I would make something then post it as a small come back ^_^. Though I want solid Strict CnC, no one with low skills. The most people I want to comment here are, Darth BrowarodHunterDj OsirisBloodrunJMacks ( :P )Icyblue& others that I might have forgot " JP ( 1 ) "Effect(s)This card can only be activated by the owner. After your Draw Phase check your hand, if there are any Monster Card(s) with 5 stars and above, remove 2 stars from each card. If you do this, pay 500 points for each card you used this effect on. After 2 turns of this card's activation, if you have Summoned any card that you removed 2 stars from, remove 2 cards in your Graveyard from play. "I also added a bit of "Other" text in the card just to fill it up.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Not a bad concept. I ain't an OCG person, but I can tell that's off.As for the effect, it's ok. But it makes Synchro just that much more powerful =/... Above normal, but not good either. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Is it supposed to be Continuous, rather than Quick-Play? Also, in this case the OCG would be Level 5, not 5 stars, etc. I do think it's interesting you made a Japanese card, though. Nice overall ^_^ I really, really like the pic ;) As for the effect, it's like a repeatable Cost Down, so I think it may be overpowered. But, otherwise, it's certainly an interesting card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 "Haha ^_^ Thanks guys, I'll have a better shot at it next, probably. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chemiclehero Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Im slightly insulted whats wrong with low stars like me commentingon the pictures I myself wouldhave been honured if you rated my magiciancard which no one is for some reason and then I dont know whats wrongbut yeah on my scale A-Abnormaleout of 10 - 10out of 100 -101 ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Only OCG error that I see is "remove 2 cards in your Graveyard from play." It should be "remove from play 2 cards in your Graveyard." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Well this is an interesting concept, it seems kinda OP as you might be able to get a high level creature with some massive power by requiring only 1 tribute instead of two. I like the art though, also Japanese style cards got popular didn't it. replace stars with level, also I think the second line with "checking your hand" is not needed, but I might be wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Im slightly insulted whats wrong with low stars like me commentingon the pictures I myself wouldhave been honured if you rated my magiciancard which no one is for some reason and then I dont know whats wrongbut yeah on my scale A-Abnormaleout of 10 - 10out of 100 -101 ;) ";) Bud I said people with low skills can't comment. Not low levels ;). & Thank you for at least giving time in seeing this. Only OCG error that I see is "remove 2 cards in your Graveyard from play." "It should be "remove from play 2 cards in your Graveyard." "I'm using the new OCG >.> Not the old ( as I think ) Well this is an interesting concept' date=' it seems kinda OP as you might be able to get a high level creature with some massive power by requiring only 1 tribute instead of two. I like the art though, also Japanese style cards got popular didn't it. replace stars with level, also I think the second line with "checking your hand" is not needed, but I might be wrong.[/quote'] Might be bud, I'm back to the n00b position here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Only OCG error that I see is "remove 2 cards in your Graveyard from play." "It should be "remove from play 2 cards in your Graveyard." I'm using the new OCG >.> Not the old ( as I think ) http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Allure_of_Darkness Read. Remove [insert random thing here] was never the "new" OCG. It has always been "remove from play". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Im slightly insulted whats wrong with low stars like me commentingon the pictures I myself wouldhave been honured if you rated my magiciancard which no one is for some reason and then I dont know whats wrongbut yeah on my scale A-Abnormaleout of 10 - 10out of 100 -101 ;) ";) Bud I said people with low skills can't comment. Not low levels ;). & Thank you for at least giving time in seeing this. Only OCG error that I see is "remove 2 cards in your Graveyard from play." "It should be "remove from play 2 cards in your Graveyard." I'm using the new OCG >.> Not the old ( as I think ) http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Allure_of_Darkness Read. :P "Well I don't even read TCG xD but yes as I said to Fighter' date=' I'm back to n00bness at this.[/size'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Not really >_> noobs use different things and can't make any cards that are decent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 "Bumpity Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deloge Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Just askin but isnt that Destiny Draw picture? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 "Yeah, changed some things in it ^_^. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deloge Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 "Yeah' date=' changed some things in it ^_^.[/size'] I see.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 I didn't know what picture is that until I played my Tag Force 3 and use Destiny Draw. NIce effect by haris, though. Correct your OCG just like everyone's suggested. What is the name of the card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YCMagician Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Just because were new doesnt mean we have low skills your just being stereotypical i'm gonna rate anyways Coz i have got Good rating skills.and also a unique rating system that u can gain prizes for [spoiler=rating]Good OCGfitting picture Effect isn't too over poweredBONUS POINTi'll give your card 16/15better luck next time if u gt 18+ you get points BTW Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 I didn't know what picture is that until I played my Tag Force 3 and use Destiny Draw. NIce effect by haris' date=' though. Correct your OCG just like everyone's suggested. What is the name of the card?[/quote'] Lol.... I made the image ;) & Yeah I'll correct is... someday. The card's name is 'No Rating'. Just because were new doesnt mean we have low skills your just being stereotypical i'm gonna rate anyways Coz i have got Good rating skills.and also a unique rating system that u can gain prizes for."Bud' date=' this is the internet, don't take anything seriously ._.[/size'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 The art is simply astounding! What do you actually mean by "can only be activated by the owner"? 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 The art is simply astounding! What do you actually mean by "can only be activated by the owner"? 9/10 "First of all' date=' Thank you ^_^. By that I meant that only the owner of it can activate it, so if you're opponent activates a card which requires exchanging, he cannot use it even if he exchanges it with something else ;).[/size'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 So it makes it look like somewhat of a dead draw (figure of speaking, you know what i mean. Right?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 I didn't know what picture is that until I played my Tag Force 3 and use Destiny Draw. Nice effect by haris' date=' though. Correct your OCG just like everyone's suggested. What is the name of the card?[/quote'] Lol.... I made the image ;) & Yeah I'll correct is... someday. The card's name is 'No Rating'. You did?! I thought haris did!*goes to haris' Custom Image Thread*Oh, I mustn't have seen it before. Right, you did it. I'm sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan LeFlay Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Wow that card is pretty amazing graphic-wise. The effect is pretty good too. Not sure if you're just translating the Japanese OCG, but some things could be worded better if it was for the TCG (such as the use of stars VS Level) That's only really minor though since the card itself is in Japanese. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 So it makes it look like somewhat of a dead draw (figure of speaking' date=' you know what i mean. Right?)[/quote'] "For you're opponent? Yes. You did?! I thought haris did!*goes to haris' Custom Image Thread*Oh' date=' I mustn't have seen it before. Right, you did it. I'm sorry.[/quote']"Haha ^_^ It's okay bud. Wow that card is pretty amazing graphic-wise. The effect is pretty good too. Not sure if you're just translating the Japanese OCG' date=' but some things could be worded better if it was for the TCG (such as the use of stars VS Level) That's only really minor though since the card itself is in Japanese. Great job.[/quote'] "Thanks & yes the OCG could be worded better as said by some people here ^_^. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 I would like to know the E.T of this cardE.T = English Translation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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