Plaguespreader Zombie Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 [align=center] Card LoreThis card can only be activated when your opponent Special Summons a monster from the Graveyard. At the cost of 500 Life Points, you can remove the monster from play. If this card is negated by the effects of a Spell or Trap Card, add 1 card from the Graveyard to your hand. Image Credit: Father Wolf Card Lore:If this card is removed from play by the effects of a Monster Card, once per turn you can negate the Special Summoning of any Aqua-Type monster from the Graveyard as long as this card remains in the removed from play pile. Image Credit: Haris Card LoreWhen this card is Summoned, both players draw until they have 6 cards in their hand. Each player then looks at their opponent's hand. Both players then select 3 cards from their opponent's hand and send them to the Graveyard, these cards are treated as removed from play. Image Credit: Skyfire Card Lore:This card is removed from play during the End Phase of the turn it is activated. Both players must select 1 Monster, Spell, and Trap Card in their hand. These cards are removed from play. During your third Standby Phase after this card is activated, all cards in the removed from play pile are added to their respective owners hand. Image Credit: Father Wolf Card Lore1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsterThis card is destroyed during the End Phase of the turn it is Synchro Summoned. As long as this card remains in the Graveyard, your opponent cannot Special Summon monsters from the Graveyard. Image Credit: Catman XXV[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 This card is basically useless as a Normal Spell. Make it a Quick-Play. Also, the name "Corrupted Reborn" makes me think it's a monster. Maybe "Corrupted Rebirth" or "Corrupted Revival" would be better? But yeah, make it a Quick-Play Spell and I'll give you an 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted March 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 This card is basically useless as a Normal Spell. Make it a Quick-Play. Also' date=' the name "Corrupted Reborn" makes me think it's a monster. Maybe "Corrupted Rebirth" or "Corrupted Revival" would be better? But yeah, make it a Quick-Play Spell and I'll give you an 8/10.[/quote'] DX Sorry, I forgot to make it a Quick-Play. Corrupted Reborn makes you think of a monster? =\ How? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 isnt this a Harris image? you gave credit to Father Wolf.. the card is cool, but it would need to be a Quick-Play to work. and OCG is a bit "oldskool" too. ;) 7/10. i really like the idea. ~Kale. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 It sounds like... a Monster that is Reborn. Yes, it's not made for the pun, Reborn sounds like you're talking about a monster more than a spell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted March 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 isnt this a Harris image? you gave credit to Father Wolf.. the card is cool' date=' but it would need to be a Quick-Play to work. and OCG is a bit "oldskool" too. ;) 7/10. i really like the idea. ~Kale.[/quote'] Thanks :) And no, it's Father Wolf's image; he added it yesterday/today. It sounds like... a Monster that is Reborn. Yes' date=' it's not made for the pun, Reborn sounds like you're talking about a monster more than a spell.[/quote'] I thought because that it was Corrupting a Reborn of a monster. I thought that would be a good name for the spell :? Updated Card added. :) Name changed to Corrupted Revival. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 "This card can only be activated when your opponent Special Summons a monster from the Graveyard. By paying 500 Life Points, you can remove from play the monster. If this card is negated by the effects of a Spell or Trap Card, add 1 card from the Graveyard to your hand." That should be the correct OCG. Mehish card at best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 isnt this a Harris image? you gave credit to Father Wolf.. the card is cool' date=' but it would need to be a Quick-Play to work. and OCG is a bit "oldskool" too. ;) 7/10. i really like the idea. ~Kale.[/quote'] Thanks :) And no, it's Father Wolf's image; he added it yesterday/today. oh, duh.. sorry, i was looking at both threads at the same time and got a bit confused. ;) its still an interesting idea for a card.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 "By paying 500 Life Points" not "At the cost of 500 Life Points". And to make it right you need to condense that phrase and the first sentence. With this wording, you can activate the card only when your opponent Special Summons a monster from the graveyard, but you don't have to do anything with it (i.e. don't have to pay the Life Points and use the effect). So it should be written "This card can only be activated by paying 500 Life Points when your opponent Special Summons a monster".You might even be able to take out the Life Point cost. Eenie-meenie-minie...8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 Seems like an interesting card. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted March 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 "By paying 500 Life Points" not "At the cost of 500 Life Points". And to make it right you need to condense that phrase and the first sentence. With this wording' date=' you can activate the card only when your opponent Special Summons a monster from the graveyard, but you don't have to do anything with it (i.e. don't have to pay the Life Points and use the effect). So it should be written "This card can only be activated by paying 500 Life Points when your opponent Special Summons a monster".You might even be able to take out the Life Point cost. Eenie-meenie-minie...8/10.[/quote'] Thanks. I added the life points cost so that it wouldn't be OPed. "This card can only be activated when your opponent Special Summons a monster from the Graveyard. By paying 500 Life Points' date=' you can remove from play the monster. If this card is negated by the effects of a Spell or Trap Card, add 1 card from the Graveyard to your hand." That should be the correct OCG. Mehish card at best.[/quote'] Your OCG differs from Dr. Cakey. :? Thanks for the OCG Fix. :) Seems like an interesting card. I like it. Thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amaterasu Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 I think this is cool 9.8/10 [spoiler=OCG Fix]This card can only be activated when your opponent Special Summons a monster from the Graveyard. At the cost of 500 Life Points, you can remove the monster from play. If this card is negated by the effects of a Spell or Trap-Card, add 1 card from the Graveyard to your hand. Real good OCG. Just make sure you space twice at the end of a sentence and hyphen Trap-Card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted March 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 I think this is cool 10/10 [spoiler=OCG Fix]This card can only be activated when your opponent Special Summons a monster from the Graveyard. At the cost of 500 Life Points' date=' you can remove the monster from play. If this card is negated by the effects of a Spell or Trap[b']-[/b]Card, add 1 card from the Graveyard to your hand. Real good OCG. Just make sure you space twice at the end of a sentence and hyphen Trap-Card That OCG isn't correct. Trap Card is not hyphenated. You don't need to space twice; Only once. But thanks for the rate :) Also, I have decided to turn this card into a set based around the Negating the Special Summoning of monsters from the Graveyard. Card 2 Added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Bump. Card 2 Edited. Card 3 and 4 shall be up later today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Woot this is really good cards cant wait for 3 and 4. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Woot this is really good cards cant wait for 3 and 4. ^_^ Thanks ^_^ Card 3 Added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bribri123123 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 I like them, but I think the first one is overpowering... It is a win/win situation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Yeah this is awsome 9.99/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 I like them' date=' but I think the first one is overpowering... It is a win/win situation[/quote'] I thought of that too. =\ But, then again. It is the main card in the set, so it's probably going to be Overpowered. But, since it's negated the first effect won't happen. Yeah this is awsome 9.99/10 Thank you ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 BUMP! Card 4 and 5 added ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Nice cards, and nice choice of pictures ;) Good ocg, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted March 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 Nice cards' date=' and nice choice of pictures ;) Good ocg, 9/10[/quote'] Thanks. BUMP; 3 New cards coming later today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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