aznxpwr Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 My first post :D, hope the pictures show up. Im not so proud of my blade of seiryuu, but couldnt find any cool swords D:. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caeel Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Wow, 9/10, quite balanced in my opinion. Maybe a tad off here and there but overall very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Let me introduce you to what will be happening a lot here: tearing your cards apart based on their grammar. I'm not as good at finding errors as some, so be warned...1. Change of PlansThe correct text is: "Activate only when your opponent declares an attack. The attack target gains 1000 ATK and DEF until the end of your 3rd turn after this card's activation."This is a somewhat overpowered card, by the way. 2. Dragon - Chirolife points = Life PointsAlso, I don't think you need to state that the player must shuffle, this is assumed any time you get to see the contents of your deck. 3. Dragon - EarthThe correct text is: "When your opponent activates a Trap Card, toss a coin. If Heads, negate the activation of the Trap Card and destroy it." 4. Dragon - FrostThe correct text is (I think): "As long as this card remains on the field, your opponent must Set Spell Cards before activating them."This is probably overpowered, too. 5. Dragon - Gear DragonThe correct text is: "This card is also treated as (a?) Dragon-Type. Lower the ATK and DEF of all non-Dragon-Type monsters by 200." 6. Dragon - GorgosThe correct text is: "When this card is destroyed by battle (most cards also say "and sent to the Graveyard"), you can destroy 1 opponent's monster." 7. Dragon - GustThe correct text is: "When this card is destroyed by a card effect (if it's not battle, it has to be a card effect), randomly select 1 card in your opponent's hand. if it is a Monster Card, Special Summon 2 (This is where it gets hard. Most Dragons have "Dragon" in their name, so instead I'd try this: ) "Dragon -" monsters from your Deck."This is also overpowered. I recommend changing it to 1, and making it Level 4 or lower. 8. Dragon - KnightThe correct text is: "If there are 3 "Dragon -" monsters in your Graveyard, you can Special Summon this card. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all Set Spell and Trap Cards."This is definitely overpowered. To be fair, its not as overpowered as a certain real card I like to call Judgment Dragon, but that is neither here nor there. I recommend changing it to "This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 "Dragon -" monsters in your Graveyard." 9. Dragon - SeiryuuThe correct text is: "This card can only be Ritual Summoned with "Blade of Seiryuu" and Tributing 2 Dragon-Type monsters from your hand or that you control. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 Dragon-Type monster you control to remove from play 1 card in your opponent's hand. I don't have time to do the rest, but there are errors in others. That said, I really do like these cards a lot; they are pretty impressive. I say...8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aznxpwr Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Wow thanks for your help Dr. Cakey, I appreciate your corrections and be sure to change the descriptions! You obviously know your facts.Oh, i just noticed my mistake for "Dragon - Gust", originally i meant to type 4 star but probably forgot, i dont think that it's overpowered because the chances of him drawing a monster is 1/3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 I know it well, but there are many people who know much better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sahan Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Grammar needs improving but apart from that gd8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aznxpwr Posted April 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Seems like this topic died out D:, no one comments anymore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 its been said that there are errors. the cards themselves are pretty good, but to be honest i'd rather see more spellcasters or rock monsters. dragons are WAAAAAAAAY overdone. either way, 8/10 for the fact that many effects manage to be very simple and yet still creative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axira10 Posted May 6, 2009 Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 Let me introduce you to what will be happening a lot here: tearing your cards apart based on their grammar. I'm not as good at finding errors as some' date=' so be warned...1. Change of PlansThe correct text is: "Activate only when your opponent declares an attack. The attack target gains 1000 ATK and DEF until the end of your 3rd turn after this card's activation."This is a somewhat overpowered card, by the way. 2. Dragon - Chirolife points = Life PointsAlso, I don't think you need to state that the player must shuffle, this is assumed any time you get to see the contents of your deck. 3. Dragon - EarthThe correct text is: "When your opponent activates a Trap Card, toss a coin. If Heads, negate the activation of the Trap Card and destroy it." 4. Dragon - FrostThe correct text is (I think): "As long as this card remains on the field, your opponent must Set Spell Cards before activating them."This is probably overpowered, too. 5. Dragon - Gear DragonThe correct text is: "This card is also treated as (a?) Dragon-Type. Lower the ATK and DEF of all non-Dragon-Type monsters by 200." 6. Dragon - GorgosThe correct text is: "When this card is destroyed by battle (most cards also say "and sent to the Graveyard"), you can destroy 1 opponent's monster." 7. Dragon - GustThe correct text is: "When this card is destroyed by a card effect (if it's not battle, it has to be a card effect), randomly select 1 card in your opponent's hand. if it is a Monster Card, Special Summon 2 (This is where it gets hard. Most Dragons have "Dragon" in their name, so instead I'd try this: ) "Dragon -" monsters from your Deck."This is also overpowered. I recommend changing it to 1, and making it Level 4 or lower. 8. Dragon - KnightThe correct text is: "If there are 3 "Dragon -" monsters in your Graveyard, you can Special Summon this card. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all Set Spell and Trap Cards."This is definitely overpowered. To be fair, its not as overpowered as a certain real card I like to call [b']Judgment Dragon[/b], but that is neither here nor there. I recommend changing it to "This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 "Dragon -" monsters in your Graveyard." 9. Dragon - SeiryuuThe correct text is: "This card can only be Ritual Summoned with "Blade of Seiryuu" and Tributing 2 Dragon-Type monsters from your hand or that you control. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 Dragon-Type monster you control to remove from play 1 card in your opponent's hand. I don't have time to do the rest, but there are errors in others. That said, I really do like these cards a lot; they are pretty impressive. I say...8/10. omg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 6, 2009 Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 pic are overusedOCG errors7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L. Rutsah Posted May 6, 2009 Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 Lol, the sword is my favourite weapon in halo 3! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iSTIX Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 Nice pictures,nice cards,nice job 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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