MarbleZone Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 [spoiler=Lore] This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 3 monsters with different Attributes. This card cannot be destroyed by battle, and you take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. This card is unaffected by your opponent's Spell Cards, Trap Cards and Effect monsters' effects. You cannot Normal Summon or Set monsters. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent by attacking directly, that damage becomes 1000 and they discard 1 card. Each time a monster is Summoned or Set, this card's Level is decreased by 2. Each time a Trap Card is activated, this card's Level is increased by 1. Each time a Spell Card is activated, place 1 Immortal Counter on this card. When the number of Immortal Counters on this card is equal to its Level, destroy all cards on the field. Yes, it's long. Deal with it, it's supposed to be the evil God used by the yet-to-be-revealed main antagonist of my not-dead-yet-but-seemingly-so fanfic. :P On a serious note, it's not supposed to be balanced once it's out. It's supposed to kick ass. But that's why it has a Summoning condition of 3 monsters with different Attributes (which practically doesn't happen in real life dueling except maybe in Gladiator Beasts), and a no-Normal-Summoning clause once it hits the field. The OCG is most likely correct as it is entirely based on cards from Crossroads of Chaos and Crimson Crisis - if something sounds weird, look up cards from those expansions and get in touch with the way it's done now instead of randomly saying "OCG errors 7/10". ;) I do not own the art in this card. Copyright is given in place of the edition to the best of my knowledge, as the image was downloaded long before the current copyright policy. Regardless, it was taken from Photobucket, not Deviantart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Awesome!! 1 OCG error. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent by attacking directly...Change toWhen this card successfully attacks your opponent directly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Awesome!! 1 OCG error. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent by attacking directly...Change toWhen this card successfully attacks your opponent directly "When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent by a Direct Attack". It should be that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 you made me laugh and feel stupid at the same time...thats bad for my mind!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted March 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Well, I disagree with both changes, to be honest, but if more people support it, I'll change it, naturally. ;) Still, slightly more detailed comments would be nice... Well, any comments at all, actually. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoboJoe Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 *Thumbs up* I like the effect and card. I've seen the pic used couple of times, but that is just me. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted March 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Yeah, that's a problem of keeping images stored for too long without using them - they are old by the time you use it in a card. :/ Thanks for the comment anyway :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tedomime Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 hey i like the card , nice pic and cool effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:ABC: Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 to much text and also it is an un oririgal pic, but those things aside it would make a nice card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted March 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 "Too much text" is probably the first comment of that type I've read thus far. Which is kinda weird. I'm not fond of "Tribute 2 cards you control to draw 2 cards"-like effects. If I wanted to make them simple, I wouldn't spend so much time designing them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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