HelioSpark Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 [align=center]Well, I'm probably a little rusty. But I wanted to get back into card-making, so here I am. Feedback would be greatly appreciated :) Image credit goes to ~gotgituey on Deviant. [spoiler=Effect]This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: Once per turn, during you Main Phase, you can discard 1 Effect Monster Card from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on the field and inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 This is.. good. The effect is relatively short if you ignore the Gemini's requirement text. So, I can't admit a lot for originality. I'm having struggles of my own with originality, though, so I can't be very critical about it. The effect almost seems unbalanced, but Geminis are not as simple to pull off as some people want to believe. It's a good effect, certainly can't be overlooked when active. Level 3 with 1600 ATK is alright for a Gemini as well, it offers a little stall ability. Good card. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted March 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Yeah I kinda played it safe with this card, still trying to build my creativity back up :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Effect Monster Card Spell or Trap Card______________________________ 1000 damage is a bit much IMO, even though it doesn't overpower the card, really. (just seems like it) nonetheless, it's a good card. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted March 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Oh, thanks! and fix'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 vary cool card. if you toned down the damage from 100 then a 9/10 easy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted March 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 Well I was thinking that having the 1000 damage balances out the fact that a) It's a gemimi, which are generally hard to use and b) you have to discard an effect monster, not just any card, to activate its effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted March 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 Is it kinda overpowered? Seems like it to me I bet if this card was real it'll be banned in tourneys, but I do like the idea though and sweet image as well! 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nate106593 Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 I like the pic lol...Esspecially the skin the the center...:DSeriously though, welcome back, nice work 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:(yeah, standard part of a Gemini monster, lets get down to bussiness :) ) Once per turn,(I strongly believe that comma shouldn't be there =/ ) during you Main Phase, you can discard 1 Effect Monster Card from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on the field(I don't see the overpoweredness everyone is talking about, in a non-Gemeni Deck, this card will need a couple of turns to have effect, or be Special Summoned first and then spend your Normal Summon on it to make the move a bit quicker. Your opponent can always chain the destroyed card and you will always loose the card you discarded, although I can see some cards that want to be discarded..Lets also not forget that it requires an Effect Monster, meaning absolutely no Gemenis can be used with this card...(good in a warrior Deck in my oppinion) and inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.(it sounds balanced to me to make damage from it, after all, the risks have already been stated above :) ....King Pyron does that too, but for free, he doesn't destroy, & he requires tribute, but can be searched with UFO Turtle.. I would say 800, not 1000, I know its not much difference but it somehow looks like alot of damage..(maybe not really sinse you loose your hand)ahhrg!!! w/e ...... I like the card.. I'm not a fan of the pic but I like the card... I didn't find OCG (save for the comma), so .... I'll give a 9/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amaterasu Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted March 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 Thanks!But aleister, can I at least know why you marked me off so I can try to fix it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 Thanks!But aleister' date=' can I at least know why you marked me off so I can try to fix it?[/quote'] [align=center]Because he wanted to fit in with the crowd... I like the card but the pic could be cropped to focus more on the actual image, not the background. Um, I'm not giving this a 10/10 because I don't see the FIRE attribute in it, save for the red suit.... Maybe make it Earth? And the DEF seems too low... maybe around like 700? That's my analysis on your card! Very nice, I like Gemini but it's a little hard to use don't you think? It's usability is low, and I for one wouldn't use it, but that's just me. All in all, great job and nice pic. 9.4/10[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted April 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 Thanks for the helpful criticism :DI made the defense that low to help balance the card out. Being a 1600 ATK 3 star in addition to its effect called for it to have a major downfall, so I chose to make it an incompetent defender. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoshiman™ Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 nice to see you back in cc i like it. pic could be better. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted April 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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