shikadi Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 My first card Effect:If there are no other Zombie-Type monsters on your side of the field, destroy this card. When this card is normal Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Zombie-Type monster from your Deck or Graveyard. When this card is removed from the field, except when Tributed for a Tribute Summon or Set, you take Damage equal to its original attack. effect:Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to your "Zombie pack leader" as an Equip Spell Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Defense Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, This monster counts as another zombie on the field. when the equipped monster is destroyed, its effects are negated (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time.) I hope this cards is realistic enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 CAPITALIZE WHEN NEEDED!!! 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shikadi Posted April 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 i fixed the capitalizing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 quite good for your first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 its pretty good. id fix the ocg on it other than that tho not a half bad card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shikadi Posted April 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 Which ocg errors? Is this also a balanced card ? It has a drawback just like all 2000+ lvl4 attackers , but also a positive searching effect(plaguespreader zombie searcher or so). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 i fixed the capitalizingYou still need to capitalize when needed. You didn't do it quite correctly ;) Zombie needs to be capitalized, too... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 When there are no other Zombie-Type monsters on the field,(space)destroy this card(take out space before point).(space after the point)When this monster is removed from the field (except when Tributed for a Tribute Summon or Set)(comma, then space)its current controller takes 2000 Life Points Damage.(space)When you successfully Summon this monster(take out space before comma), you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Zombie-Type monster from you Deck or Graveyard.(space)Your opponent designates the Type of that monster(point) this last part doesn't make sense, if its a Zombie, it can't be designated otherwise... or you mean Attribute?ok... let me just try to rewrite the effect, this has too much to correct ^-^"If there are no other Zombie-Type monsters on the field, destroy this card. When this card is Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Zombie-Type monster from your Deck or Graveyard. When this card is removed from the field, except when Tributed for a Tribute Summon or Set, you take 2000 Damage. card is overpowered (and this has nothing to do with the part of the effect I took out).with call of the mummy/zombie master/mezuki/pleaguespreader zombie/zombie world/book of life/ etc... this card will never be the only zombie, also, this card is 2 zombies for the price of 1.. even if destroyed, zombie master is the first thing that will target it and special summon it, and this card then will special summon something too... I was guessing this card was too powerful but I was going to let it slide.. that is ... until I saw the ATK of this Level 4 or lower monster.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shikadi Posted April 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 This card is destroyed when there are no other Zombie-Type monsters on the field. the special summoned monster is not meant to keep him alive, but to support zombie swarming.Dna Surgery can change zombies into fishes, so does this one, if you enemy wishes. And wow . Are there so many error :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 there are almost no Decks around with DNA Surgery around... believe me ;).. normal Summon Zombie Master, Discard 1 card to Special Summon this card, then special Summon whatever is next.. now you have a 1800 ATK monster, 1 with 2300 ATK, and one of your opponent's choise.. the price is... 1 Normal Summon, and 1 card from your hand.. your opponent gets PWND now :D I didn't mean to say I believe he survives by its own effect, (I know he doesn't).. what I meant is, Zombies already have way too much help in Special Summoning, so that effect will not be a problem AT ALL... and even if he died.. its effect is not negated so you will not loose much.. also, I forgot to name another card for Special-Summoning-Zombie-Support>>> Ill Blud in the right Deck this is a 5 monsters per turn for like 2 or 3 cards from your hand at most (and this does not nessesarily spends your Normal Summon of the turn) :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shikadi Posted April 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 I did not think that way, I think its better to add to normal summon it to have the searching effect. But you still lose 2000 LP (1/4 of you total) if he dies in another way then a tribute summon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 Too lazy to fix obvious errors. The card is some what acceptable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shikadi Posted April 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 I added 2 support cards (which it don't need :p) i also weakened him a bit , he's now earth instead of dark (attribute is less supported)he must be normal summoned for its effect and the zombie must be lvl3 or lower now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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