Exodia Nemisis

[temphelios]

Exodia with a twist, rather than instant win, it keeps you from losing. atleast by normal means. Picture credit goes to google image search.

 

 

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned if "Exodia the Forbidden One", "Right arm of the Forbidden One", "Left Arm of the Forbidden One", "Right Leg of the Forbidden One", "Left Leg of the Forbidden One" have been removed from play. This card is not destroyed as a result of battle at any time or by effects of spell or trap cards. As long as this card remains face up on the field, you do not lose as a result of having 0 life points. If any of the listed cards are returned to play, this card is destroyed. If this card is destroyed you lose the duel.

 

Note: You can still lose through other effects. IE Destiny board, Normal Exodia, Last turn, ect.

 

DOE refers to "Dissolutions of Eternity" a set Im working on after "The Forever Ones".

[TrickyPooBoy]

OCG errors, good job though. 7/10.

[temphelios]

OCG errors' date=' good job though. 7/10.

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My biggest problem is OCG, which Is why I appreciate advice in that regard. Thanks though :)

[OverlordMMM]

.....thats a nice idea......definitely a nice twist to the normal duel, but I think you should rephrase this part: "If any of the listed cards are returned to play, this card is destroyed. If this card is destroyed, you lose the duel."

 

 

to

 

"If any of the listed cards are returned to play, this card is destroyed. If this card is destroyed and your Life Points are 0 or less, you lose the duel.

 

 

.....I'm too lazy to fix OCG right now, so I'll just skip to the score....

 

Overall: 8

Idea: 9

Implementation: 7

[TrickyPooBoy]

You cards rock. Just capitalize "Normal Summon", "Special Summon", and all the other "Summon"s. :D

[AsterikcAde]

O_O, this version of exodia is very risky to utilize and some ways in it's effects it seems overpowered, this card if it was real will definitely be banned and restricted in an official duel.

Anyways, 9/10

[Neilsweaky]

Risky card, a bit here and there in the rulebook, but nice.

[temphelios]

This card is risky but thats the point really :P You can play all the powerful life point spending cards you want without a care but on the other hand all your opponent has to do is play a card that effects cards removed from play and you lose. Its powerful but you have to use it wisely.

[Dr. Cakey]

It's also killed by monster effects, meaning it still bows before the Lightsworn meta that is Judgment Dragon.

[temphelios]

Iv fixed it so that now it cant be destroyed by Man Eater Bug or similar effects. (Although I got the old text from Exodia Necross so I dont know how you can get more OCG than that.)

 

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned if "Exodia the Forbidden One", "Right arm of the Forbidden One", "Left Arm of the Forbidden One", "Right Leg of the Forbidden One", "Left Leg of the Forbidden One" have been removed from play. This card is not destroyed as a result of battle at any time or by effects of monster, spell or trap cards. As long as this card remains face up on the field, you do not lose as a result of having 0 life points. If any of the listed cards are returned to play, this card is destroyed. If this card is destroyed you lose the duel.