Chaos Demon Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 This is my newest card. I have not been on for ages, so my card making is a bit rusty. Please comment and give ideas to make it better. By the way, I have updated it so please comment on the newer version.Thanx. P.S. By the way, I got the pic from Google images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jcns731 Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 its ok so i say 6/10wait sry 4 my rating is different Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted April 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 So In your rating 4 is better than 6? Keep your comments coming, people! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted April 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted April 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 BUMP. Come on, guys. I really want some comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 I like the picture (isn't it from LotR?) but death isn't a real type and you should make it an Union and get rid of some stars (way to much). Sorry for now a 6.5/10(change the stars and i wil make it a 7.5 and make it a Union and it wil be a 8 or 8.5). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Rhino Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 I like it, but its selection of monsters is far to broad, try limiting the amount of monsters it can control, for example DARK monsters or Fiend and Dragon-Types, in my opinion, would make it far more realistic and balanced, and try adding some sort of bonus that helps/hurts you and/or your opponent, which will make it more unique, otherwise its like a generic "long-term" change of heart, but it eats up one of your spell/trap card zones. For now, i cannot rate it above a generic card rating. Please don't let this discourage you from making more cards, i absolutley love the concept you are trying with this card. So here is my final review:OCG/Effect - 2/10Picture - 9/10Idea - 9/10Final - 6.66/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted April 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 OK thanks guys I'll improve on it ASAP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 All write you updated it! now it is an 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted April 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Thanx. The reason it is a Death-type (Which isn't real) is because I have made it up, specificaly for them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 im not being rude but its a bad pic, there is Writing at the bottom and really it needs to have a full background and it looks a bit too squashed. The Effect Is Very Plain, Maybe Make it so there is a drawback. Sowwy i wouldnt run this in any of my decks..... 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted April 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 That's fine, negative feedback is good, so I can learn from my mistakes. Only problem is, I don't know how to get rid of the text at the bottom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Rhino Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Dude thats Great! Good job. New Rating:OCG/Effect - 8/10Picture - 9/10Idea - 9/10Final - 8.66/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted April 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 Thanx, Dark Rhino. By the way, folks, I'll add some new cards soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 Try not using fake types, if you want to make your own type just use that as a sub-type, this card is okay but it's not the best... 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naturia Master Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 its ok 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted April 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 Ok, thanx, cAde2009.7/10 is not bad. Please keep comments coming, people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted April 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 Bump. C'mon I need your help to make this card better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 i like this card...i could use it in my deck...:DD...9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Rhino Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 Thanx' date=' Dark Rhino. By the way, folks, I'll add some new cards soon.[/quote'] not a problem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted April 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 i like this card...i could use it in my deck...:DD...9/10 Thanx. If you like it then check out my other cards when I release them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Bump......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tehking Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 The picture is pretty good to me, although the effect is kinda boring, fake type. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 bump it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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