-Dark Lord Rawbrek-

[Windowlicker]

Its been a long time since i've posted cards on here. Please correct my mistakes (if any). Also, don't critisise Dark Kingdom for being boring. Its all you would expect out of a ritual spell.

[spoiler=Effect] This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Dark Kingdom". When your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card, you can to negate its effect and destroy it. This card cannot attack during the turn you activate this effect. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can discard 5 cards from your hand to Special Summon this card in Attack Position.

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card is used to Ritual Summon "Dark Lord Rawbrek". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand.

 

[Sunshine Jesse]

Correct OCG:

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Dark Kingdom". When your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card, you can negate the effect of the card and destroy it. If you do this, you must skip your next Battle Phase (or: This card cannot attack during the turn you activate this effect. Dont know your intenion). This effect can only be used once per turn. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can discard 5 cards to Special Summon this card in Attack Position.

 

Nice card. Good, but not too overpowered. The discard 5 cards thing is kinda rough though.

[Windowlicker]

Thanks for the help ;). Changes have been made.

[Windowlicker]

BUMP!

[GHawk]

OCG and Grammar 8.5/10

Originality 7/10

Balance and Playability 8/10

Pic 4/5

Total 27.5/35