LiAM Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 [align=center]If you're lazy enough not to read it, then go away. :) Also, some OCG fixes if you can be bothered (if you cant go away :)) [spoiler=[b]Heavy Arms Mecha Ogre[/b]]This card cannot be Summoned except by Tributing 5 monsters you control. When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, you can remove from play up to 3 cards in your Graveyard to increase your Life Points by 700 for each card removed. Once per turn, remove from play the top 3 cards of your Deck, if you cannot, destroy this card. Once per turn, by paying 1000 Life Points, roll 1 six-sided die, depending on the result, activate 1 of the following effects:1: Special Summon 1 of your removed from play monsters with 2000 ATK or less in Defence Position.2: Increase your Life Points by 2000.3: Draw 3 cards, then discard 1 card from your hand.4: Select up to 4 of your removed from play monsters annd show them to your opponent. Your opponent then selects 1 of the monsters, Special Summon the selected monster and return the other cards to your Deck (your Deck is then shuffled).5: Inflict 500 points of direct damage to your opponents Life Points and increase your Life Points by 500 for each monster you control.6: Discard your hand. Draw 6 cards from your Deck.This card cannot declare an attack the turn it was Summoned. When this card is selected as an attack target by a non-Warrior-Type monster, decrease this cards ATK by 2000 during Damage Calculation. Once per duel, if you have 20 or more cards removed from play, increase your Life Points by 100 for each card. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 I stopped at ".........Tributing 5 monsters you control..........." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 and why did you stop there? 'cos its bad or 'cos its 'tl;dr' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Great OCG, nice pic, overall awesome (as usual). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Kinda both........... When did you start making random lists >_> also 5 monsters is near impossible to get out. Also I don't bother reading a bunch of random lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Great OCG' date=' nice pic, overall awesome (as usual).[/quote'] Overall awesome? Hah! Nice one. Firstly, it's Summoning is WAY to costly. Secondly, the card is, well, too funking overcomplicated. I mean seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Well its only a small list with a huge effect around it, its not JUST a list if you read it... it also has a RFP effect slant. and 5 monsters is easy in a Plant deck or stall or token. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darthmual5 Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Well its only a small list with a huge effect around it' date=' its not JUST a list if you read it... it also has a RFP effect slant. and 5 monsters is easy in a Plant deck or stall or token.[/quote'] or meta (blackwing <-- grrrr XD) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Right well this card will fail in those decks, it is like building a whole deck to just run this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Well thats what a Deck is for, sometimes Deck's revolve around one card, like a DAD Deck. Some Decks only use one card, oh, a Cyber Dragon Fusion Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Well you would have to build a good deck to at least use this card. Also Dad is easier to get out then this card, so it is worth it also can you see what you can do with Dad. EDIT: Also cyber dragon is limited so that deck is useless, unless you can get cyber proto dragons out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cypress Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 100% yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 100% yes Yes to what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 That is a very long effect^^quite cool^^9.5/10I don't like the pic very much^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Tl;Dc Learn your limits. This card isn't impressive at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 The card is uncontrollably overcomplicted as well as being underpowered (you could change the number of tributes to 3 instead of 5). The grammar itself is spot on. The picture isn't incredible, but it'll do. All in all, 8.5/10I can clearly see you've put some effort into this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Von Csent Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 And I thought Relinquished had tiny print . . . Does it come with a magnifying glass? Anyway, some of the effects just seem out of place and random.- Why non-Warriors?- Drawing, healing, and burn, in addition to the D.D. support? It is too busy. I would just stick with the RFP themes. As for balance, it is hard to judge if the effect and ATK are too much for the tributes, too little, or just right. Make it less spontaneous first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeroLuneth Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 It's OP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 It's OP I'm guessing this is n00b humour? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 It is not OP, just over complicated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 Over-complicated, but I like it. :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YU-GI-OH 27 Posted May 3, 2009 Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 I found a MAGIC card @ http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/archive/index.php/thread-29486.html! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2009 I found a MAGIC card @ http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/archive/index.php/thread-29486.html! wtf? spam? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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