Zeaux Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 [align=center]The Strange Rabbit-Dolphin [spoiler=Effect]This card is also treated as an Aqua-Type monster. A monster attacked by this card during your Battle Phase, is changed to Defense Position. You can discard 3 cards from your hand to reduce the DEF of 1 monster on the field to 0. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, discard 1 card from your hand to draw 1 card from your Deck. If you don't have a card in your hand during your Standby Phase, destroy this card. Hope you like it.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 hmm..very nice card... i like the pic..9/10..i see no ocg errors... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 wow man this has some potential. Maybe u should send pic to like wolf or haris or something so they can make a background, but i only see about two small errors. Its also very clever the names a little weird(dolphin). but here are small fixes quite honestly this is one of ur best keep up the good work my man....and thanks for pmThis card is also treated as (an) Aqua-Type monster. A monster attacked by this card during your Battle Phase, is changed to Defense Position. You can discard 3 cards from your hand to reduce the DEF of 1 monster (on) the field to 0. Once per turn,(during your Main Phase,) discard 1 card from your hand to (d)raw 1 card from your Deck. If you don't have a card in your hand during your Standby Phase, destroy this card. there u have it keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Really thanx both :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 FIXED!!plz more rates!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Advice for pic: Crop out the focal, put a spacey BG on it, make it a Neo-Spaicain. Or put some elemental BG and make it an Elemental Hero. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 thanxAny rate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 BUMPmore coments!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Heh, PM. Well, for me, the picture is too plain, it just needs a better background. The only OCG error I can find is this line: "A monster attacked by this card during your Battle Phase, is changed to Defense Position." I'm not entirely sure about this :/ During your Battle Phase, if a monster is a selected as an attack target by this card, change that card to Defense Position. I like it though, well balanced effect, flows. 8.9/10 - Fix up the picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 well i sent this pic to Father Wolf so maybe if he does it to me i will fix the Picanyway thanx for the rate :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 [align=center]OxygënHydrõ™ Rating ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Comments : Use capital word on "dolphin"Need image creditGood pic ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- OCG fix *None* ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Pic : 9/10Balance : 7/10OCG : 8.5/10 Overall : 8.1/10[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 So does nobody else think this pic looks f***ed up... Look closely surely someone else can see it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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