-Black Marauder [Holo Edition]- (next person to comment gets a +rep)

[koramore]

great holoing is this gonna stay a single or be in a set

[Windowlicker]

Its most likely gonna stay as a single. Can't risk spoiling the card by making a bad set.

[Windowlicker]

BUMP!

[Zeaux]

well you fixed the OCG error that i said so now i will change my rate

9.5/10 and i think you could make this card as a archfiend monster his effect are almost the same

[Windowlicker]

Wasn't really intending to make it an Archfiend. I'd either have to change the picture or the name. Each is holoed. Therefore it can't be done since I can't reholo it myself.

[Windowlicker]

DUMP!

 

EDIT:Aw, I was 2 minutes off. Does it still count as 24 hours?

[Wanderley]

I really like your card

it is balance

the OCG errors are fixed by other members

great holo

nice job

i give you an really nice

9/10

[Windowlicker]

ßUMP

[Windowlicker]

BUMP!

Final bump.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

OCG Fix:

 

Once per turn you must pay 500 Life Points. If you cannot, destroy this card. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, inflict 800 damage to your opponent.

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Bolded = possible addition to the effect (Then again, it's got the LP cost to stay on the field.)

 

Pic seems alright, seeing as the whole card is blurred.

 

Name holo is kinda bad, to be honest; the one on the pic is decent. (When doing name holos, it's best to set the rarity to rare or secret rare.)

 

Overall, a decent card.

 

8/10

[Windowlicker]

Thanks for the advice :)

[.:Traceur:.]

hmm..this card is very good..

i like the pic and the holo...

the OCG is good..minor errors...

overall-good card 8/10...

little bit UP.'cause of paying to many life points to make it stay on the field...and then activating the effect you lose 1000 more life points...

[Windowlicker]

BUMP!

Okay.

I lied.

This is (hopefully) my final BUMP.

[Kenjutsushi]

The card over all was good. Last line of defense, ace in the hole type of good. Wouldn't want to have him out too long since it could back fire and cause you to lose in the end. score 9/10