Shadowflame Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 Hi I'm Shadowflame. This is my first card that I've finished. I've got about 9 more cards that I've got to find images for and about 17 more cards that are still on paper. The name of the set this card is from is called G.I. war. The image was taken from Father Wolf's Custom Image Archive. Tell me what you think and what i can do to improve it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 It sucks/10OCG error.Poor effect.Try again.(Father Wolf has very dull images... :/) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tensho okami Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 that's a pretty nifty card ya got there, the only thing I really see wrong with it is one OCG error (stand-by phase = Stand-by Phase) I give it a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Light Flash Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 Every turn During your Standby Phase, roll a 6-sided die. If the result... destroy this card.is an odd number, destroy this card. If it's a even number, increase the ATK of this card by 500.^Try adding this^Add this as a 3-star (If you want)-ATK/DEF 800|500Since it is your first card 7/10 :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iSTIX Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 You forgot to put a comma in "During your Stand-by Phase," and it's LV 4 and the ATK and DEF is 2000? a bit too overpowered by nice pic.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowflame Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 well i figured that since every turn there is a chance that this card could be destroyed by its effect that the atk and def were kind of justified. what do you think the atk and def should be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 the pic is good...the effect is UP(underpowered)ocg is bad...overal:4/10... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eternal Duelist Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 its a good card you just need to fix it up a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Eum... is this a joke? Oxo? An odd number? What's an odd number for ya? Plus, the OCG is bad, just with "odd number" and "Stand-by phase (which should be Standby Phase, btw)". So sorry, but it's bad and please fix the effect. 2.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PowerlinX Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 It's pretty good. The OCG should be "During your Standby Phase." Plus, I would have the effect do something good if the result is an even number, but that's just me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 uhh...well the pic is great but the ocg, well thats a different story.....the card is a little over powered u want something like dis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pure.awesomeness Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Good for first card. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowflame Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 I've made a few more changes. so what do you think about it now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlickimenT Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Lore is meh, Name is alright, Puny lack of Puncuation, LV4, with 2000?4.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 wow~~!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowflame Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Can you tell me what's so wow about my card? I could use all the tips that i can get. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 its very nice. the effect balances out, its strong and has a significant chance of dying making it not too strong good pic, n nifty name 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowflame Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 thanks. I'll try to finish the other G.I. cards that i've thought of soon. it's tough to find good pictures for some of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEATHBRINGER ZX Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Cool Shadowflame 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
midnight_blue Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 you could make it: if you roll 1 or 6 to destroy this card any other result your opponent randomly discards 1 card. kinda like snipe hunter but with a different effect and higher ATK/DEF power 8/10 for now :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 well i mean it could be better sry to be so mean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowflame Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 It's fine. I need poeple to tell me what they really think about the card. any more tips about how i can improve this card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowflame Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Antone else going to rate it?  Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowflame Posted May 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Megacyber Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 It looks great 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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