Wanderley Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Mr. IncognitoMr. Incognito[align=center]This card can only be Tribute Summoned by tributing 3 monsters you control. This card cannot be selected as an attack target. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, place 1 Incognito Counter on this card. This card gains 100 ATK for each Incognito Counter on this card. Remove 2 Incognito Counters from this card to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls.[/align] what do you think about it?^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 The card is OP, resembles somwhat of a beat stick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Why this card is OP it is an Level 9 monster? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Level 9 = 2 Tributes >_> Can avoid most frontal attacks, so it can beat the crap out most monsters. Then each time it attacks it gains 100 attack and counters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 NO^^Level 9 ---> 3 Tributesand it get only gain 100 points if this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Yes level 9 monsters are 2 monsters, what rules are you smoking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 then i change the level to 10^^is it then more ballance?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Still 2 monsters >_> read a rule book. 5 or 6 = 17 or higher = 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 sorry man^^your right^^ but i think the card is a little bit strong but not OP^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Remove first line and then it will be fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 You can make its effect require 3 Tributes... Attack target should not be capitalized. Remove is lowercase when is should be capitalized. Overall, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 I make this card to a 3 tribute monster^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlickimenT Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Errors in OCG. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Errors???where?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 This card can only be Tribute Summoned by tributing 3 monsters you control. This card cannot be selected as an attack target. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, place 1 Incognito Counter on this card. This card gains 100 ATK for each Incognito Counter on this card. Remove 2 Incognito Counters from this card to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls.-"Remove" usually is not capitalized in cards but this time it does due to the fact it is right after a point.-bla bla Counters don't need these ----> " " -If you meant that the card can only be Summoned that way, add this:This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. althought that would make the card way too slow so I don't recomend it really....hmm... I'm not sure if the card is overpowered or not... it requires 3 Tributes and it is not a Special Summon, meaning that if you can get to Summon it, you kinda deserve the effect...But the fact that it can't be attacked is what worries me, but not that much... I would say ...since its a Level 10 there's not much support for it, and the LIGHT Attribute makes it imposible to use with cards like Allure of Darkness .....card ends up being okay in my opinion ;) just fix OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crow™ Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 I would add some kind of Special Summon restriction...it is kind of OP..~9.4/10~Until then... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 thank you all for comment^^i fix the OCG now^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 It looks better :) don't let all those comments get to you, card is not overpowered because of these:-you need 3 Tributes and to waste your Normal Summon to get it (and its not unaffected by anything so your opponent can kill it easily)-It starts at only 2600 ATK and only increases its ATK from 100 and 100 at a time-The fact that it has to inflict Battle Damage to get the Special Type of Counter makes it slower.-The effect of removing 2 Incognito Counters to destroy 1 monster are good but since the Counters are pretty much only with his effect, he is deeply outclassed.just look at this card and how much stronger it is (its a real card and I don't see anyone saying its broken <_< ): -Faster-gains 200 for each so it will quickly be stronger than your monster-same effect, remove 2 and destroy 1 monster, but Spell Counters have alot of support and I can make this guy get about 7 counters right after I summon it :) (differently than your "1 for Attack" plan) so... not overpowered... ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 thank you for the long description^^you are a nice member^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 come on people what are you sayis the image nice??any comments please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Yeah, not getting where people are saying this is overpowered. It's hilariously underpowered if anything. Ironically enough, Magical Marionette came to my mind first. Then it had added battle immunity and I didn't really care. This will be taken care of with a card effect before two turns even rolls around for it to blow up a monster. Way too slow, but a cute idea. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 what could i do to balance it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 great and simple~~!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 thank you^^ any rate?? I like the image^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Wow, the pic is friggin awesome! I would just remove the "cannot be selected as an attack target"-part, else its almost perfect!I can imagine this card as a real one. 7.9/9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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