NEW PSYCHICS : GODS OF TIME, SPACE, AND EXISTENCE, RATE IT AND COMMMENT

[[Kagerius_XxX]]

These r my first cards so tell me if i have some OCG error or some fixes

1st One

When this monster is Normal Summoned, Special Summoned, or Tribute Summoned, all monsters on your opponent field cannot Attack 3 turns.

2nd The Godly one

 

This Monster is not Effected by any Effect of any card. This monster cannot be Destroyed by the Result of Battle. This card can only be Special Summoned when your LifePoints is lower than 700. After the Third turn after this card is Summoned, You may send 25 card to Graveyard from the top of your Opponent's deck. If you use this effect send this card to the Graveyard.

 

3rd

Send a 9 or more Level Monster to the Graveyard each turn and increase this monster ATK equal to ATK of the sended Monster

 

4th the simple one

 

 

SO HOW IS IT?? TELL ME WHAT U THINK......

ALL IMAGES FROM DEVIANT ART

[.:Traceur:.]

a lot of ocg errors...

some pics are bad....

what to say...

overall:not so good...3/10

[Max Darkness]

There are a large number of OCG errors, but I'll try to fix them for you:

 

Faceless Time Void:

i) Change name to "Faceless Time Creature" (sounds better)

ii) It's effect is far too powerful as it is.

iii) This is what I would change it to: "When this card is Normal Summoned, Set or Special Summoned, your opponent cannot declare an attack during their next Battle Phase."

 

Mother of Time and Existance:

i) Change name to "Mother of Time and Space" (sounds better)

ii) Don't make DIVINE monsters. Change to LIGHT

iii) Too powerful to be a Lv.10. Change to Lv.12

iv) Question: If this card cannot be destroyed by Spells, Traps, Monsters or Battle...how does it get destroyed? It can't. Therefore it is stupidly overpowered.

v) Effect: "This card cannot be Summoned except when your Life Points are reduced to 250. Negate the effects of Spell and Trap cards that designate this card."

vi) The bit about discarding over half the opponent's deck is just stupidly overpowered (again).

 

Nuclear Planet Eater:

i) Change name to "Planet Destroyer"

ii) The effect is far too powerful. For example, send Blue-Eyes Ultimate to the Graveyard and voila, you have a 5500 ATK power monster. The only thing that can stop that is Ra. Overpowered.

iii) Change the effect to this: "This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the number of Level 9 or higher monsters in your Graveyard x 1000."

iv) Change level to 10

v) Change ATK and DEF to "?"

 

The Source of Destruction:

i) Change name to "Beast of Destruction"

ii) Increase to Level Eight. It's effect is very strong for a Lv.7

iii) Effect: "When this card is Summoned, move all monsters in your Graveyard to your Deck. Your Deck is then shuffled."

 

 

That should sort out most of the errors. At the moment, I would give these cards 3.5/10.

[[Kagerius_XxX]]

i'll really gonna fix all these junk T-T *Dissapointed with my first cards/or failure should i say*