-Lightray Daedalus- Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Well at least I tried to....XD V2 for the pic. Effect: "Salvation Dragon - Savior Dragon" + "Black Rose Dragon" + 1 non-Tuner monsterOnce per turn, negate the effect(s) of 1 face-up monster your opponent controls until the End Phase, then change it to Attack Position, and reduce its ATK to 0. You can remove from play any number of cards in your Graveyard to destroy the same number of cards your opponent's controls. Return this card to the Extra Deck during the End Phase, and Special Summon 1 "Black Rose Dragon" from your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Interesting. A good hand-drawn card. Wow. This card is intense. All the sacrifices + returning to the Extra Deck and its effect. Wow.I like it! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adama. Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 I am impressed with your card art, but, despite its difficult summoning conditions the card is rather overpowered. Also, it is "remove from play" not just "remove". Despite the fact that I like your art, the effect is still not very good. However, your creativity and effort in drawing your own art brings you up to a 3/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Fix'd! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
123hriwu3beofuf89383y Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Why does the Card look odd? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 what do you mean with odd? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
123hriwu3beofuf89383y Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Well, Look at it, It Looks Different, Compare it to a Synchro, it Looks different Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 You mean the template?...it looks ok to me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Wow, I really like it, things like this make me want to learn to draw better so that I could make decent art for my own cards, maybe even get them out of the written section.Apart from that, the destruction effect is a bit too far. I understand keeping with BRD's nuke theme but DAD+5 is over the top. Make the effect, whatever it ends up being, activate only when summoned and have a cost from your hand/field/lifepoints, since the Graveyard isn't too useful all the time, especially dumped s/t cards. Great art, probably the best attempt at an assault mode/savior dragon I've seen, OCG looks solid and it genreally sticks to BRD fairly well. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Thanks for the comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
123hriwu3beofuf89383y Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Griffin, R you following me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Once per turn, negate the effect(s) of 1 face-up monster your opponent controls until the End Phase. Then, change it to Attack Position and reduce its ATK to 0. You can remove 1 Plant-Type monster in your Graveyard to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. Return this card to the Extra Deck during the End Phase, and Special Summon 1 "Black Rose Dragon" from your Graveyard. -Underlined part is more "Black Rose" like and less broken this way, don't try to surpass DAD by removing anything you please.-Pic is good but coloring makes the outline of the drawing hard/imposible to see, so... basically I'm telling you its horribly hard to see details in there but I still like it (work on the thorns of the tail)-Its a typical Savior Dragon, its better than the stardust form, but I think the effects overlap.. don't know how to explain it... you will negate the effect of a monster and just like black rose dragon, you will lower the ATK to 0 and have it in Attack Position. but with the incredible DAD-like effect you don't really need this one. ^-^" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Freed Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Hasn't someone already made a "Savior Rose Dragon" before. Or was that you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murch Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 YAY! a self made image!!i dont follow 5ds, so i dont have a clue what else it would look like, but drawing gives more creativity. for another self imager, see my promo set! 9.(insert random number here)/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crow™ Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 I really like it. The pic is accurate to what I pictured BRD would look like, effect is broken, but for a Savior, it works.~9.989/10~I like it a lot! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted May 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 YAy! Thanks A Lot I know it is OVERPOWERED...but also too difficult to summon XD anyway I made htis with artistic inspiration more than to make the best card....But hell Yeah people liked it Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingdom01 Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 great card, i like the effect, the summoning conditions are pretty hard but the effect is really strong9/10!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Great 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted May 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 Bump I made another pic for it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 I like this. My favorite pic is the second one, but I think you should bring out the color of red in the wings more, like in the first one. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilikesharks2020 Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 Very good hand drawn cards! I'm an artist, and I can't even draw that stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 I like the second one better :) but work on your pointy edges (the thorns are round-ish, just a little) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Awesome pics!! Overpowered , hard to summon but still awesome!! 9.5 / 10 for me :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 I saw the Synchro cards looked a little different than the ones here on YCM. If you want to make really great great and realistic Synchros, go here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 That link is to YCm cardmaker I don't see the point there... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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