Wanderley Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Frury, Cute Dangeroues Butterfly[align=center]When this card is Summoned, increase your Life Points by 500. Each time your opponet draws a card, he must show you the drawn card. When the drawn card is a Trap Card, send it to the Graveyard.[/align] only a simple one^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adama. Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 The effect does not fit the picture at all, and is unoriginal. I do not see what is unique about this card. Also, the holographic effect poorly covers up the fact that it lacks a background. Also, I do not believe that "drew card" is a proper phrase. Overall, I give it 2/5. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 But in the other hand this thing is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!Looks like beautyfly IMO... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 thank you^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adama. Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Its art style is rather pokemon like. However, its name and your reaction to my criticism leads me to believe that this card may in fact be more of a joke card. Since it is not a particularly good regular card, perhaps you could consider revising it so that it is funny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Its art style is rather pokemon like. However' date=' its name and your reaction to my criticism leads me to believe that this card may in fact be more of a joke card. Since it is not a particularly good regular card, perhaps you could consider revising it so that it is funny.[/quote'] what are you talking about^^that isn't a joke card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adama. Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Very well. However, your attitude to it seems to be rather joking. You also have yet to respond to my other criticisms of the card. I am disappointed :c Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhHerro Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 drew=/=drawn Some grammar/OCG issues, but I dig the picture... If it's a joke card, I'm not even going to bother pointing out the errors, although there really aren't too many problems... The effect itself is obscenely overbroken, so 0/10. It has to be a joke card... Honestly, this card would rape any metagame EVER. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 NO this isn't a joke card and you did make only 1 card so not so worst ratings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shonen Jump™ Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 effect doesnt suit the pic no background realy thats just what the holo is hiding and I could swear that pic looks exactly like some pokemon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 no this isn't a pokemon^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shonen Jump™ Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 i quote myself "I swear it looks" I didnt say it was; or question you if it was for that matter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 ok^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chainsaw20x6 Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 i dont think its terriable, its not good, but not that bad. Its useable and i dont think its broken. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 It seems eveyone looks at this card as a joke, and there are not many serious comments hereO_o This is my opinion......................... OCG correction:When this card is Summoned, you gain 500 Life Points. Each time your opponent draws a card(s), they must show you the drawn card(s). if the drawn card is a Trap Card, send it to the Graveyard. -Name is weird, no offence-I advice you add a background to the pic and then holo it again (I like the butterfly though)_-I don't like ATKs/DEFs with digits lower than 100s (the 50 in ATK/1050 and the DEF), but that's not for me to decide....-I don't get what the word "overpowered" means for everyone else, I just see a low ATK/DEF WIND insect, Level 3... insects are weak WIND monsters are not used that much the most used levels for synchros are 2,4,6.... bla bla bla..-Now for the effect, 500 Life Points its not a hole lot to gain concidering also that this only works when you Summon it, since healing your life doesn't damage your opponent or provide you with any card advangate, people don't usually use it unless its in ridiculously big quantities.-Second effect discards all Traps your opponent might draw, but with those stats, it won't take too long for the opponent to get rid of it, and even if it stays on the field its not a threat.for example: my Deck doesn't even run Traps :) so... not overpowered (I think my explanations are alittle more messy this morning ^-^" sorry about that) I'll give it a 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Freed Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 EPIC FAIL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 EPIC FAIL lol^^a 1 star member^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 he = he/she a lil' good simple effect (but this card should be easily destroyed)not one of your best cards 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 that is right^^ i made this in 1 minute^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 lame name wick pic horro holo rhyme slime. Put into better words: What if your opponent if a girl? Where's the background to the image? Holosheets don't make good backgrounds. A lot of your effects seem to be short. Maybe short is good. ATK and DEF equal? It's a goddamn butterfly, since when has a butterfly been powerful enough or have enough defence. lol - it needs a suit of armour. Pic would be better with a background =/ As you can tell, I write a sentence then look back at the card trying to find another mistake. Again the name - cute and dangerous. I thought I was bad - lol. When the drawn card... = If the drawn card... opponet = opponent Meh... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhHerro Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 NO this isn't a joke card and you did make only 1 card so not so worst ratings What? Write intelligible sentences and I'll be happy to respond to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 @Zeaux: he/she = they/ their Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 oh thanx Marvel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 that is right^^ i made this in 1 minute^^ Luckily for you, you can change things and edit until its no longer a meh 1 minute work ;) (start) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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