i want constructive critisism on my second realistic card.its also my first attempt at a spell.please look.changed effec

[dopeyduck13]

[color=FF0000][size=x-large][center]haha i knew you'd look.im trying to get some interest in my card.:lol:[/center][/size][/color]

[size=x-large][align=center]Here it is:(NOTE THE ADDED EFFECT:lol:)[/size]

[img]http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/7642/268982.jpg[/img]

[size=large]image link:
[url]http://yourpleasantdarkness.deviantart.com/art/Seelie-Tarot3-High-Priestess-88509573[/url][/align][/size]

[size=x-large][center][color=#0000CD]This is only my second attempt at a realisitic card and is my first real attempt at making a Spell Card.I look forward to your ratings(hopefully good ones ;)) and as usual im looking for [u]constructive critisism[/u][/color][/center][color=#0000CD]This is only my second attempt at a realisitic card and is my first real attempt at making a Spell Card.I look forward to your ratings(hopefully good ones ;)) and as usual im looking for [u]constructive critisism[/u][/size]

[size=xx-large][color=#FF1493][center]Thanks :lol:[/center][/color][/size]

[dbatesman91™]

emm i like it.

 

i think its quite useful as you dont have to wait for the ritual spell to come up in your deck and if you are fond of ritual monsters then this card would be a great addition to a deck.

 

cool card 8/10

[ŞťřïЖЄѓ™]

Sorry for not looking at your card, that spammer is banned now so we can now take notice. Sos.

 

I think this card is really good for a card.

It's only my opinion, I'm not a great card expert.

9.9999999999999(+0.00000000001! ;))/10

[dopeyduck13]

Sorry for not looking at your card' date=' that spammer is banned now so we can now take notice. Sos.

 

I think this card is really good for a card.

It's only my opinion, I'm not a great card expert.

9.9999999999999(+0.00000000001! ;))/10

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cheers.

even if your not an expert your input is as valuable to me as an expert's.

 

thanks for rating.

[Sander]

It's just a copy of Advanced Ritual Art.

 

'Nuff said.

[dopeyduck13]

It's just a copy of Advanced Ritual Art.

 

'Nuff said.

 

is it?

 

i've never heard of this card but im not really a huge fan and wouldnt know a lot about cards so maybe our right. are you sure though??

[General Freed]

Advanced Ritual Art: Choose a Ritual monster from your hand, choose Normal monster(s) from your deck to the same level as that card and send them to Graveyard. Special Summon the chosen Ritual monster.

[dopeyduck13]

Advanced Ritual Art: Choose a Ritual monster from your hand' date=' choose Normal monster(s) from your deck to the same level as that card and send them to Graveyard. Special Summon the chosen Ritual monster.

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ohh i see.

they are quite similar arent they.:(

 

oops sorry :lol:

[Windowlicker]

[align=center]OCG is good.

Picture is meh. Not too interesting. Prehaps change it.

Prehaps add another effect. That would make it look like you haven't copied Advanced Ritual Art.

7/10[/align]

[dopeyduck13]

[align=center]OCG is good.

Picture is meh. Not too interesting. Prehaps change it.

Prehaps add another effect. That would make it look like you haven't copied Advanced Ritual Art.[/align]

 

but would a spell with 2 effects not be too much?

 

and i personally think the pic suits the cards effect.

[.Impact]

ocgs off too but thats basically advanced ritual art

[dopeyduck13]

ocgs off too but thats basically advanced ritual art

 

err ok.

 

hmm i may have to add another effect to get people to stop mentioning Advanced Ritual Art

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ive changed the effect a bit.

 

now what do you's think?

[dopeyduck13]

^^BUMP^^

 

ive edited the effect.:lol: