Nikkiboy029 Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 *Thread added to ALD list* cool by the way new card and i think i need help on the ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 OCG fix:As long this card remains face-up on the field, decrease the DEF of all "Tearra" monsters an the Field and increase their ATK by 200. In the End Phase of the 4th turn this card is sommoned, you can remove this card from play and Special Summon 1 "Tearra" monster from your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 OCG fix:As long this card remains face-up on the field' date=' decrease the DEF of all "Tearra" monsters an the Field and increase their ATK by 200. In the End Phase of the 4th turn this card is sommoned, you can remove this card from play and Special Summon 1 "Tearra" monster from your Graveyard.[/quote'] thank you i'll change it^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 3, 2009 Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 Welcome to Fuzzie's group :) I like it when people draw their own cards ^-^I was out for 2 days... I would correct all OCG but I feel confused because I didn't exactly read all the content on every comment, instead I'll say I like the pic, it could be stronger (unless the rest of the cards you are planning on doing make up for it), and that the big errors I saw are: whenever you write "summoned" you do: Summonedin yugioh cards, you never write the numbers with letters.. (one = 1) that's about it... and I'm not used to giving rates (I'm not accurate anymore ^-^") YAY :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted June 3, 2009 Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 As long as this card remains face-up on the field, decreas the DEF of all "Tearra" monsters on the field by 500, and all "Tearra" monsters you control gain 200 ATK. During the 4th turn after this card has been Summoned, you can remove it from play to Special Summon 1 "Tearra" monster from your Graveyard. BTW, link fixed. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted June 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 Welcome to Fuzzie's group :) I like it when people draw their own cards ^-^I was out for 2 days... I would correct all OCG but I feel confused because I didn't exactly read all the content on every comment' date=' instead I'll say I like the pic, it could be stronger (unless the rest of the cards you are planning on doing make up for it), and that the big errors I saw are: whenever you write "summoned" you do: [b']S[/b]ummonedin yugioh cards, you never write the numbers with letters.. (one = 1) that's about it... and I'm not used to giving rates (I'm not accurate anymore ^-^") YAY :) Oh yes i plan to have way other cards in this set that are very powerful, lets just say these cards are the bread of my pp&j and i will change thank you^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted June 4, 2009 Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 Hello, Picasso Nikki! Your cards are MEAN!!! 10/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilherospencersimpson Posted June 4, 2009 Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 KEWL! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted June 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 Thanks everyonethanks for the ocg fix fuzzie:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowboy Dan Posted June 4, 2009 Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 [align=center]Pretty Good.summoned = Summoned, as mentioned.Good art.9/10.[/align][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted June 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 [align=center]Pretty Good.summoned = Summoned' date=' as mentioned.Good art.9/10.[/align'][/size] i can't find, where you mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 4, 2009 Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 [align=center]Pretty Good.summoned = Summoned' date=' as mentioned.Good art.9/10.[/align'][/size] i can't find, where you mean? I guess that means you check the card effect for all the "summoning" words and check to"Summoning" if required..at least when I do that, its because its pretty much the only error and its repeated in multiple part.. I don't know if it is the case for this one though. ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 4, 2009 Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 Not bad but maybe you are mistake because post decrease what means - points 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted June 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 [align=center]Pretty Good.summoned = Summoned' date=' as mentioned.Good art.9/10.[/align'][/size] i can't find, where you mean? I guess that means you check the card effect for all the "summoning" words and check to"Summoning" if required..at least when I do that, its because its pretty much the only error and its repeated in multiple part.. I don't know if it is the case for this one though. ^-^ yea but i checked all of my Summons and they are all capitalized.... so i don't understand where's the uncapitalized summon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 4, 2009 Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 yeah you are right :/hmm.. just ignore it then ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted June 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 yeah you are right :/hmm.. just ignore it then ;) well ok then cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilikesharks2020 Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Some are a little op'd, many OGC's: 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Some are a little op'd' date=' many OGC's: 5/10[/quote'] what do you mean "some are"? there's only 1 card here.There are not that many OCG errors (if you really saw any), if so, correct them instead of waisting a comment.5/10? at least give him credit for the art. That's someone that didn't see the card and just wanted to increase their post count -_-" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted June 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Some are a little op'd' date=' many OGC's: 5/10[/quote'] what do you mean "some are"? there's only 1 card here.There are not that many OCG errors (if you really saw any), if so, correct them instead of waisting a comment.5/10? at least give him credit for the art. That's someone that didn't see the card and just wanted to increase their post count -_-"yeah i kinda figured that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 I see you updated first post. I wouldn't recoment putting 1 card out and the rest in a spoiler (for a moment I thought you had erased the other card).for now as a quick review, I'll just say some cards could be stronger.. I'll come back some other time with the details ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted June 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 I see you updated first post. I wouldn't recoment putting 1 card out and the rest in a spoiler (for a moment I thought you had erased the other card).for now as a quick review' date=' I'll just say some cards could be stronger.. I'll come back some other time with the details ^-^[/quote'] no the other cards are in a spolier it says "other cards"and these are just the weak cute ones, my other cards are gonna be stronger i just have to color them, so i can post them. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Harp Kid: This monster can attack your opponent's Life Points directly.[insert space here]When this card is in face-up Attack Position, you can Special Summon 1 "Talented Harper" from your hand or Deck. Your Deck is then shuffled. Talented Harper: This card gains 100 ATK for each face-up Spellcater-Type monster on the field.[insert space here]You can send 2 cards from hand to the Graveyard to destroy 1 card on the field. This card can also be treated as 2 Tributes for the Tribute Summon of a DARK monster. that's about it ^-^you can actually use "discard" but when it follows a "from your hand to the Graveyard" I feel its unnecesary writting, and since using "send" keeps the meaning, its shorter, and its also correct..well :)You NEVER, EVER, need to writte that the Deck needs to be shuffled. That's a given to all effects that search from the Deck and hasn't been used in actual cards for the past.. what would it be?.. 4 years or so? ...yup Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted June 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Harp Kid: This monster can attack your opponent's Life Points directly.[insert space here]When this card is in face-up Attack Position' date=' you can Special Summon [b']1[/b] "Talented Harper" from your hand or Deck. Your Deck is then shuffled. Talented Harper: This card gains 100 ATK for each face-up Spellcater-Type monster on the field.[insert space here]You can send 2 cards from hand to the Graveyard to destroy 1 card on the field. This card can also be treated as 2 Tributes for the Tribute Summon of a DARK monster. that's about it ^-^you can actually use "discard" but when it follows a "from your hand to the Graveyard" I feel its unnecesary writting, and since using "send" keeps the meaning, its shorter, and its also correct..well :)You NEVER, EVER, need to writte that the Deck needs to be shuffled. That's a given to all effects that search from the Deck and hasn't been used in actual cards for the past.. what would it be?.. 4 years or so? ...yup sorry i'll fix all of thatthe reason all of my ocg is old is because i really only have old cards, i started to collect when i was like 10 then stopped at about 12, because nobody i knew liked yugioh anymore, so it' been a good 3 years since i've gotten any new cards, and the only reason i got so interested into it again is because of the 5d series, so yeah thats why i always need help on my ocg because i'm a little old fashion.. ^///^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Nothing to apologize for ^-^ you are not the only one I know that passed through that ;)No problem, fixing what I can is what I do :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilherospencersimpson Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 gREAT CARDS!10/10!NICE ORIGINALTY WITH THE SELF-DRAWING! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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