evilherospencersimpson Posted June 3, 2009 Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 My first "real" card, and I have to say Im pretty pleased: Comments?All my credits go to google! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhHerro Posted June 3, 2009 Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 First of all, you have a 2100 ATK 4 star monster. That in itself is broken. Second of all, the effect isn't original... Sorry, but it's not very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilherospencersimpson Posted June 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 Yes...but if you play Goblin Attack Force, and do not attack that is a 2300 Atk on a 4 star monster providing protection of your life points..soo But I shall fix itpeace.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 3, 2009 Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 I appresiate the idea, but the card's utility is basically the one of Goblin Attack Force, but with the ability of switching back to Attack Position next turn instead of waiting longer, and with the ability of having to switch during the turn you Summon it (I don't see how the counter is going to be removed so it can gain another one, and I don't think it will keep switching possitions that often, just when you Summon it regardless of if it attacked or not). I guess if Special Summoned its a regular 1900 ATK monster without drawbacks.. the Counter thingy maybe could be re-worded in a simplier way, but I'm too lazy to figure it out ^-^".. Now if you could just ignore all my brainstorming up there, I basically like the effect, it sounds like it can use some strategy, the only thing to complain is the pic background (I didn't check for OCG this time) Keep your work, you'll improve more ;)6.5/10 (don't tell me you wanted a higher rate? you have to start somewhere :lol: ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhHerro Posted June 3, 2009 Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 Yes...but if you play Goblin Attack Force' date=' and do not attack that is a 2300 Atk on a 4 star monster providing protection of your life points..soo But I shall fix itpeace..[/quote'] GAF doesn't protect your points usually. You typically attack and let it die. And now it's just a weak version of GAF, which is a strong version of Giant Orc, so this card is even worse now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted June 3, 2009 Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 Sorry but uh the pic is f***ed up. The effect is unoriginal. Attack is sort of high for its level (i'd make it a 5 star and instead of Normal Summon , Tribute Summon) 6 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhHerro Posted June 3, 2009 Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 (i'd make it a 5 star and instead of Normal Summon ' date=' Tribute Summon)[/quote'] wtf that would make it even worse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ Posted June 3, 2009 Report Share Posted June 3, 2009 The effect and pic is kinda meh, OCG is not bad so 7/10 (I'm generous, I think). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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