One of my first cards.

[Ghost Ryder]

No joke, I fixed OCG errors I found in it, it's old =/

 

 

Effect:

This card cannot attack. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Level 4 or higher FIRE monsters. Once this card is Special Summoned, your opponent's Spell and Trap Cards effects are negated until your End Phase. If your opponent controls a monster with 1500 ATK or more, you can destroy that monster and inflict 1000 Battle Damage to your opponent. If your opponent has 5000 or more Life Points, pay 2000 Life Points and Special Summon as many monsters from your Graveyard. After you Special Summoned as many monsters as you can from your Graveyard, increase all FIRE monsters ATK you Special Summoned by 600. During your End Phase, remove all FIRE monsters that you control, inflict 200 Battle Damage to your opponent and remove this card from play. During your opponent's Standby Phase, inflict 400 damage to yourself for each FIRE monster removed from play by this card's effect.

 

Warning - Extremely long effect. XD

Rate/Hate etc.

 

Also, please rate this card, I need opinions on this card. I need to try and make it better!

[Sleepy]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Level 4 or higher FIRE monsters. This card cannot declare an attack. When this card is Special Summoned, The effects of your opponent's Spell & Trap Cards are negated until your next End Phase. If your opponent controls a monster with 1500 ATK or more, you can destroy that monster and inflict 1000 Battle damage to your opponent. If your opponent has 5000 Life Points or more, pay 2000 Life Points to Special Summon as many possible monsters from your Graveyard. Then, all FIRE monsters Summoned in this way gain 600 ATK. During your End Phase, remove from play all FIRE monsters that you control, inflict 200 Battle damage to your opponent and remove from play this card. During your opponent's Standby Phase, take 400 damage for each FIRE monster removed from play by this card's effect.

 

There is the OCG I saw, I don't like the effect, it is broken (multiple monster reborn) and even without that, its just a bunch of effects squished together, you could make a 3-5 card strategy with what's written in there... :(

 

different damages are written:

Battle Damage (the word says all)

damage (apply for effect and battle sometimes but if it says "inflict" or "take", it just aplies to effect damage outside of piercing monsters)