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Kingdom Hearts Set By ShadeZero - Organization Member IV - Zexion ADDED!


ShadeZero

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Im basicly taking a rest from the main characters ect..

and Im not really ready to make any more extras Sephiroth ect

and Im more happy to make the Heartless Monsters right now

Im basicly doing the Pure Blood Heartless first

and then going onto the Emblem Heartless

 

An I feel a little Rivalry from Transformerfan's

Heartless cards althought im not to typically worried..

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My thoughts on your most recent card; Possessor. Instead of 1 it should be one (EDIT: sorry, this bit is wrong, ignore it). I could pick at use of commas but, eh.... I dont really want to and I'm sure you won't care too much either. Second sentence should say 'equipped monster' (just a small mis-typing there) and lastly I am slightly confused as to what the last part of the effect is saying. Does the effect return the card to your hand instead of having the equipped monster destroyed or does the equipped monster still get destroyed but you just get the heartless returned to your hand. All in all, a fairly well done card. I'll give it a 6 or 7 out of 10 (partly due to the fact I can't understand that last bit; if it turns out to be my first guess I would give you an 8).

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