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My thoughts on your most recent card; Possessor. Instead of 1 it should be one. I could pick at use of commas but' date=' eh.... I dont really want to and I'm sure you won't care too much either. Second sentence should say 'equipped monster' (just a small mis-typing there) and lastly I am slightly confused as to what the last part of the effect is saying. Does the effect return the card to your hand instead of having the equipped monster destroyed or does the equipped monster still get destroyed but you just get the heartless returned to your hand. All in all, a fairly well done card. I'll give it a 6 or 7 out of 10 (partly due to the fact I can't understand that last bit; if it turns out to be my first guess I would give you an 8).

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When this card is Summoned, equip it to 1 monster your opponent controls and take control of that monster. When the equipped monster would be destroyed ''return this card to your hand.''

 

States it very clearly, it just goes back to your hand and the monster dies pretty simple. an yes I did miss-type although its fixed now ty for noticing it though =/ Although sadly 1 is correct.

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Aye, I noticed after I made the post that I wrong about the 1 part (sorry for that, that was my mistake, hehe). As for the effect, this reason I didn't understand that fully is perhaps due to the use of the words "would be destroyed" instead of just saying plain and simple "is destroyed". I feel if you said the latter the effect would be more clear, although the part about it returning to the hand IS clear, so that much I will say you have. Thanks, nevertheless for clearing that up for me though.

EDIT: Actually, nevermind. After a quick re-read I guess it reads fine the way it is.

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0.o seems powerful. Although, it is good you have only made it for one turn. However, I think it would be slightly fairer if you were not allowed to Tribute the monster that you take control of by the effect. That is all. Love the picture though. Only other thing I might pick at is that it's stats are quite high for a 1 Tribute monster.

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0.o seems powerful. Although' date=' it is good you have only made it for one turn. However, I think it would be slightly fairer if you were not allowed to Tribute the monster that you take control of by the effect. That is all. Love the picture though. Only other thing I might pick at is that it's stats are quite high for a 1 Tribute monster.

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It helps make Dark Thorn playable Lol.

Especially because Dark Thorn cannot Be Normal Summoned or Set.

and can only be Special Summoned by Shadow Stalker,

Dark Ball can Special Summon Shadow Stalker from the deck which would mean even if it was a 2 tribute it would be pointless

Although u make a good point about not being able to tribute it, guess ill change it

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Hehe, I hadn't read those other mentioned cards there and now that I have I see where you're coming from. Also had a look at Dark Thorn and it seems fine. The damage ability might be a bit much but one would only know if you play tested it I guess. So, I'd say it's safe to leave it as it is. As it has no immunity whatsoever to any form of Spell or Trap or Effect, there are plenty of cards that could clear it off the field in the actual game so perhaps one could see the damage ability as a way to give it a quick edge on the field while it lasts. So yeah, basically, no worries and well done!

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Nice card but please' date=' don't pass off an Invisible as a Posessor. I know the difference.

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I didn't put the right card image code in, please check again and post a more reasonable comment.

 

Sorry about before. Nice work on Posessor, Shadow Stalker and Dark Thorn.

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Where did you get a Dark Synchro Template. I must know. Also' date=' awesome cards. I'm a KH fan myself. I'd like to see one of Axel's catchphrase, "BOOM BABY!" But still, Dark Synchro template, need it.

 

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Meh, nice of you to say please oh wait you didn't ~_~

An what do you mean Template as in the Grey coloured card?

If so, there isn't one =/

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Nice Kingdom Key Card. There are others though:

 

JUngle King from Deep Jungle, Three Wishes from Agrabah (Wishing Lamp is KH2), Wishing Star from Monstro, Crabclaw from Atlantica (Mysterious Abyss in KH2), Pumpkin Head from Halloween Town (Decisive Pumpkin in KH2), Fairy's Harp from Neverland, Lady Luck from Wonderland, Olympia from Olympus Coliseum, Spellbinder from Merlin, Oathkeeper from Kairi, Divine Rose from Hollow Bastion, Oblivion, Diamond Dust from Ice Titan, One-Winged Angel from Sephiroth and Ultima Weapon (Redesigned in KH2).

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Hmm... pretty good cards, a few suggestions:

 

Upgrade Sora Valor-Form. We are talking about a Synchro that requires three specific monsters to summon AND is removed during the end of the battle phase. Make it gain the monsters ATK perhaps, or a bigger gain then 100x the level anyway. Greed Quasar and adding some random level gainers aside, he gets what, 1200 max increase? 3700 for a monster that only lasts a turn. Even with all the support given to the cards that go with it, I think this cards ability should be amped up.

 

Wisdom is a tad more debatable. Dunno bout it. Go with how you feel.

 

A bit of a random point, but since synchro monsters require specific levels to summon and the material for most of them are a tad off, do they need support to create the forms, or are they basically fusions that require the written cards to be sent to the graveyard a bit like XYZ Dragon Cannon?

 

Final and Master form are a tad tricky, they require the same material, yet one clearly beats the other, then again it is suppose to happen that way... Still, perhaps you could make Master form Different, rather then inferior (though technically I guess sometimes attacking twice is better then attacking all monsters)

 

With Hollow Bastion, if you control both a light and dark monster, do both their abilities activate?

 

Well, I got to go, but I'll be back. Awesome cards and I wish you luck.

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The Levels are fine, Let's use Valor, 1 + 4 + 4 = 9 Simple.

Valor's effect is fine tbh It can have 3700 ATK MAX and ATK 2 TIMES <-- 2 Direct attacks is erm 7400 Damage? with a direct attack in mid game would clearly be gg. Giving it more ATK is Op'd and over kill.

The thing about it dissapearing after the battle phase symbolizes

Sora's Drive Bar running out. This stops the forms from being broken.

 

They require specific levels yes, as I said already the Levels are fine. The Materials are fine. They do not need support. They are not Fusions.

You basicly just need the required monsters to synchro summon them.

 

Master can attack twice useful but if ur opponent has 5 monsters on the field, who'd you rather choose? Lol.

Final's attack all symbolizes it using it's awsome combo attacks. An Final is a combination of all the forms effects.

 

Hollow Bastion Issues: Priority takes place, the Light monster will always take Priority, even if you summon a Dark monster the field spell will not change.

 

 

 

Also, people stop pointing out the ovious, I am going to be making all possible weapons I can, same goes for the worlds.

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