Jonny Posted June 4, 2009 Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 hop you like it pleas correct my OCG :) /10 pls Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guy22 Posted June 4, 2009 Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 it's quite cool. i like it 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted June 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 ty man :Dbump :Pwtfbump :Pffs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted June 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 BUMPfinaly :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted June 4, 2009 Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 dude, don't BUMP like that. Once every 24 hours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted June 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 ow ok lol but can you post any notes?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted June 4, 2009 Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 sorry, but your cards are kinda bad. u have lots of OCG errors like...atack = attacksrounds = turns.atacked = attacked'Werewolf' = "Werewolf"Beast and beast-warrior = Beast and Beast-Warrior-Type monsters300 = 300."Werewolve"" = "Werewolf"destroy = destroysa monster = a monster,special soummon = Special Summonon you'r field = to your field. i give them a... 3.5/10 because your new Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted June 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 wow thx :'(but i cant make good ocg im not even english or americanbut can you tell me the ocg errors likein a real card so its easier to fix for me :(? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted June 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted June 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 bump and fix my OCG pls :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilikesharks2020 Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 0/10 11 OCG's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted June 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 wow thx i didnt said how much OCg but tell me how to fix it and send me the right OCG pleasneed to ask it too sleepy she is really good at it :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 First Card: When this card attacks a monster with higher ATK and its destroyed by battle, take control of the attacked monster during the 3rd Standby Phase after this attack.I think that's the fix, not completely sure myself. About the effect, it kinda fits the Werewolf descriptions of "if you are bitten, you become one" but the card is slow. I know that if you control the monster immediately, that's too much, but I suggest you change the underlined part for this: End Phase. Second Card: This card can only be equiped to a Beast or Beast Warrior-Type monster. The equiped monster gains 300 ATK.This effect is too old and obsolete, I suggest you add more, if you want it to work with the wolf, I have an idea but its easier to show you the idea at the end of my comment ^-^" Third Card: When "Werewolf" is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon it.Card make Werewolf into an infinite wall. I suggest you select a Phase in which you get them back. Well for now, those up there are my OCG fix. Now this is how I would have done the cards: [spoiler=My versions:]First Card:When this card attacks a monster with a higher ATK, take control of the attacked monster during your End Phase. Second Card:This card can only be equiped to "Werewolf". The equiped monster gains 300 ATK. Once per turn, if the equiped monster would be destroyed by battle, it is not destroyed. If this card is sent to the Graveyard while equiped to "Werewolf", return it to your hand. Third Card:When a "Werewolf" is destroyed by battle, Special Summon it during the End Phase. That's more or less my version of the strategy ^-^" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 The main error here is OCG, which I believe has already been mentioned. The last card especially needs a drawback. Perhaps that the special summoned card is destroyed during the end phase? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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