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Rise Of The Organization - My New Kingdom Hearts Set! (14/???) ~Zexion ADDED!~

Mizuku Kagirinai

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A lot of the effects are kind of plain.

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Would it help if we put rainbows above the effects?

 

No' date=' but it'd help if they weren't boring and generic.[/b']

 

I personally think Demyx is the best, but he should probably summon Water Clones instead of Dancer Nobodies.

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Water Clones? Im pretty sure we use Tokens and Water Clone Tokens will just sound silly. Water Token ? wow kinda plain.. Dancer Nobodies?.. Again it clearly states Dancer Token.

 

Dancer Nobodies = Dancer Tokens. I just used a different term, since I assume the tokens were referring to the Dancer enemies in KH2. But water clones make more sense, since Demyx summons them in battle.

 

Xion relies too much on Roxas, so her effect isn't that great. However, I haven't played Days yet so I don't really know what her abilities are.

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...He hasn't made Roxas yet.. judging a cards supporting ability when the card it supports has been been released yet is just silly..

 

Unless the supporting ability does nothing except increase Roxas' attack. Boooooring~

 

Axel and Larxene are rather mehish. Their effects just seem rather uninspired.

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uninspired .. you make it sound like he copied it from a text book....

Axels effect clearly resembles the effect of fire...

Larxene's is based on how she's like a ninja or uses ninja skills?

the last part resembles her connection with Lightining... <_<

 

Your point is...? If you knew more about Kingdom Hearts and Organization XIII, you could at least try to give them better effects based on their personalities, their role in the story, their fighting styles, or just about anything. Instead, you just used the most basic of basic effects.

 

(Don't get me wrong, they aren't bad. I just know a lot about Kingdom Hearts and think they could be better.)

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Eh.. ''However, I haven't played Days yet so I don't really know what her abilities are.'' You clearly state you know alot about KH.. but this set is based on KH Days... which u state u haven't played....

 

The fact that I haven't played Days doesn't mean that I don't know a lot about every other Organization member. Besides, Xion's effect is just a lame generic support that tells nothing about her abilities other than the fact that apparently she has something to do with Roxas.

 

Actually, her effect quite suits her useless role. She serves no purpose other than to be yet ANOTHER Sora clone made from mere memories, and gives Roxas his ability to Duel Wield, hence the ATK increase. So, lern2358/2Days before commenting on Xion.

 

Also, the tokens summoned by Demyx ARE the water dancers. They do actually dance if you take the time to watch them.

 

Xion's effect is still boring. You could at least get a bit more creative with it.

 

As for Demyx, that was only a minor complaint. I clearly said that it was the best of the 4. Other than that, I had no other problems with it.

 

I updated said post you quoted, so you may wish to re-read some of the stuff there.

 

Thank you for your rather harsh critism, I'll take into account their blandness and perhaps make a change, if you suggest an effect.

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I did reread it. My comment remains the same.

 

Xion's effect is still boring. You could at least get a bit more creative with it.

 

You stated that it be better to involve there role' date=' story ect

and he did that's far creative enough.

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No it isn't.

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You people need to learn to accept criticism. You can't honestly hope that everyone is going to love your cards. And if someone has a problem with your cards, you need to thank them for their opinion, see if you can make any changes for the better via use of that opinion.

 

Getting upset because someone criticized your cards is just childish. If you can't accept someone's opinions, don't post custom cards. Yuyuko's initial opinion was actually pretty tame - she complimented Demyx, suggesting one minor change, and suggested you spice up the other cards a bit.

 

It was only when you insulted this opinion that she got all jabroniy on you. For future reference, take all comments (the good and the bad) into consideration. Either that, or just stop posting cards.

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You people need to learn to accept criticism. You can't honestly hope that everyone is going to love your cards. And if someone has a problem with your cards' date=' you need to thank them for their opinion, see if you can make any changes for the better via use of that opinion.

 

Getting upset because someone criticized your cards is just childish. If you can't accept someone's opinions, don't post custom cards. Yuyuko's initial opinion was actually pretty tame - she complimented Demyx, suggesting one minor change, and suggested you spice up the other cards a bit.

 

It was only when you insulted this opinion that she got all jabroniy on you. For future reference, take all comments (the good and the bad) into consideration. Either that, or just stop posting cards.

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And you're blaming me why? I was quite happy to take in what she had to say. I like suggestions which allow me to tend to my cards and improve them. I did however find her comments a tad odd, hence why I insisted that she should perhaps make a more suitable effect for me. I even stated that it would be much appreciated.

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Now, please don't comment in this thread contradicting these events.

Only comment if you want to reasonably rate these cards professionally. Good day. =/

 

Mizuku is explaining things reasonably like an adult and what are you doing?

Your being Childish bringing it back up and giving his thread 1 Star.

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First of all, I was directing my comment at ShadeZero, not you, Mizuku. You're fine.

 

Second of all, I never rate threads. Don't blame me if someone else rated it 1.

 

And thirdly, your comment - "Only comment if you want to reasonably rate these cards professionally. Good day. =/"

 

You contradict yourself. You realize that submitting any form of constructive criticism, which both myself and Yuyuko have done, is rating something reasonably and profressionally, don't you?

 

The fact that you are openly rejecting criticism, and asking people not to criticize means YOU are the one being unprofessional, Shade. Please grow up.

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I said that because everything was getting out of hand and I'd rather have this issue gone.

Also, my point of view wasn't correctly seen.

But, if your comments are professional thats fine, but if they get rather rude then no.

 

at least try to give them better effects based on their personalities, their role in the story, their fighting styles, or just about anything. Instead, you just used the most basic of basic effects.

 

The fact that he based Xion on her role in Days, and Demyx was based in his role ((she commented fairly on him I do not deny.)) but, Xions effect was also based on her role as I said, he added the draw effect as an addition as a somewhat another Sora Clone who plays a support role for Roxas I say the effect fits well.

 

 

Unless the supporting ability does nothing except increase Roxas' attack. Boooooring~

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The last part wasn't very serious and slightly rude, but if you find it boring then thats your opinion =/

 

Now, everyones had there opinion. So, please let this topic die and act as normal civil people.

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Thank you for the great comments! I'll make the following cards next' date=' in order:

 

- Roxas

- Vexen

- Marluxia

- Xemnas

- Zexion

- Xigbar

- Luxord

- Saix

- Xaldin

- Lexaeus

 

Then a few extras, and then I'll make Spells and Traps.

 

Thank you all for looking and commenting!

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Awesome.

 

I bet the Traps are their sleights from KH Re:CoM and their Spells are their Weapons.

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Indeed. Xion's story is pretty sad.

 

Her real name was No. I. As in Sora Clone No. I. As in Number One. She went mad after Namine was tryin g to put Sora's memories back together.

 

Nice job finishing the game. Now do you unlock the different characters from Org XIII by progressing through the game or are they all available to you at once?

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Indeed. Xion's story is pretty sad.

 

Her real name was No. I. As in Sora Clone No. I. As in Number One. She went mad after Namine was tryin g to put Sora's memories back together.

 

Nice job finishing the game. Now do you unlock the different characters from Org XIII by progressing through the game or are they all available to you at once?

 

You start with Organization XIII (all of them), then you can unlock:

 

Xion

Sora

Mickey

Riku

Duel Wield Roxas

Goofy

Donald

 

I have all of them unlocked except Mickey and Sora now.

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Indeed. Xion's story is pretty sad.

 

Her real name was No. I. As in Sora Clone No. I. As in Number One. She went mad after Namine was tryin g to put Sora's memories back together.

 

Nice job finishing the game. Now do you unlock the different characters from Org XIII by progressing through the game or are they all available to you at once?

 

You start with Organization XIII (all of them)' date=' then you can unlock:

 

Xion

Sora

Mickey

Riku

Duel Wield Roxas

Goofy

Donald

 

I have all of them unlocked except Mickey and Sora now.

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Sweet. Battling the Organization is fun, but playing AS them will be even more fun. I bet you can't wait to try out all their weapons.

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Roxas Now Plox ~ ~ ~ xP

Lol.

So, will you be attempting to make Dual Wield Roxas a Card xP?

If so.. You could basicly remake Xions effect.

Altering it to something like..

 

You can release this face-up card and a face-up ''Org # Roxas'' you control to Special Summon 1 ''Org # Dual Wield Roxas'' from your Deck. If this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard as a result of Battle, Draw 1 Card. If this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard as a result of this cards effect, Draw 2 cards.

 

How about that for creative <_

 

EDIT: Here's a quick example on how the name fits perfectly.

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I'm not sure if I mentioned this already or not...

 

But instead of writing "Organization Member *insert number here*" at the beginning of every card, just put something shorter like "XIII".

 

Not only is it shorter and takes up less room, it also gives every monster a similar title in their names that could be used in effects that affect all Organization monsters.

 

There's no real reason to use each individual number (VIII, XII, XIV, etc.) because if you're going to use those in an effect, you would just use the character's actual name.

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