Severing Winds Mistress. oh also look there is a sword!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Select 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster in your Deck. Special Summon the selected monster in Attack Position and equipped it with this card. The equipped monster cannot be removed from the field except by battle or by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can remove from play 2 cards from your top of your Deck, the equipped monster can attack your opponent directly. If this card is destroyed, you can return the equipped monster to your hand.

Select 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster in your Deck. Special Summon the selected monster in Attack Position and equipped it with this card. The equipped monster cannot be removed from the field except by battle or by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can remove from play 2 cards from your top of your Deck, the equipped monster can attack your opponent directly. If this card is destroyed, you can return the equipped monster to your hand.

[Sleepy]

I can't come up with anything but I'm pretty sure there's something in the wording. Well, effect looks good. The Special Summoning part is kinda slow but effect itself is useful ;)

9/10 :)

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Thanks anyone else want to comment ^__^

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I like the card. Wind monsters are awesome. This card has a good effect too. But why 1400? Seems a bit specific. Also, it could be any WIND monster and you could just choose an extremely powerful one. I'd give it a 7/10.

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As long as this card is face-up on the field no monsters can be Special Summoned except by the effect of a Monster Card. Once per turn' date=' You can discard 1 card from your hand, this card can attack twice during your Battle Phase. If you do, this card cannot attack your opponent directly. If this card inflicts [b']1400 or more[/b] Battle Damage to your opponent, you can add 1 WIND monster from your Deck, to your hand. During the 2nd Standby Phase this effect is activated, you can skip your Battle Phase to Special Summon the WIND monster from your hand.

As long as this card is face-up on the field no monsters can be Special Summoned except by the effect of a Monster Card. Once per turn, You can discard 1 card from your hand, this card can attack twice during your Battle Phase. If you do, this card cannot attack your opponent directly. If this card inflicts 1400 or more Battle Damage to your opponent, you can add 1 WIND monster from your Deck, to your hand. During the 2nd Standby Phase this effect is activated, you can skip your Battle Phase to Special Summon the WIND monster from your hand.

 

Yea I know that you can out a powerful one -.- that is why it is specific and slow.

[Azmodius]

9/10 it's awesome! :P

[Kitty]

9.5/10 i like it...

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THanks card added >_>

[Leon Lonewolf]

nice card, even though I'm not much of WIND. Here's a 10/10

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Nice man. About the last rate, I misunderstood. 10/10. Very impressive.

[Mazerrick]

Once per turn, you

that was the only error I found good job

I <3 Forsaken Sword I could use such a beautiful combo with it

Where do you get this art, or is it a secret?

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For which one? The first one I got from photobucket.com the second pic, I can give you the link.

[evilherospencersimpson]

KEWL!!!

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No spamming plz. Thanks,

[Mehmani]

They're both perfect. Mistress seems a tad overpowered, but otherwise they are perfect.

[UltimateSynchron]

theres definetely something in the wording but other than that it is good. i think the wording problem is the part about summoning the wind monster. 8.5/10

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Thanks I will fix.

[Sleepy]

Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Deck and equipped it with this card. The equipped monster cannot be removed from the field except by battle or by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can remove from play 2 cards from your top of your Deck, the equipped monster can attack your opponent directly. If this card is destroyed, you can return the equipped monster to your hand.

 

Nice card :) (the first bold is just a way to writte it shorter, not necessary really ^-^)

 

as a rate, I would give the usual 10/10, I can think on things I can do with that card :D

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Thanks anyone have anymore comments?

[neogadget lord]

nice cards... 9.32456478999/10

 

 

for more look for my post "Rise of the Merged Beasts"

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Why did you post your card in my thread -_-'

 

That is some random number isn't it.

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Well anymore comments?

[Skyson]

LOL.

 

First card is nice, a really useful tech card for Wind decks, which don't see a lot of heavy hitters or recruiting effects. I'd try her out, for sure. 9/10.

 

 

The equip spell.. LOL. I am laughing very hard because I would win every tournament if this card was real. Ben Kei, instant summon, ability to attack directly, immunity to monster effects, let's go.

 

Ben Kei Deck loves you forever, 15/10. :]

[geekdupfireball]

Select 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster in your Deck. Special Summon the selected monster in Attack Position and equipped it with this card. The equipped monster cannot be removed from the field except by battle or by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can remove from play 2 cards from your top of your Deck, the equipped monster can attack your opponent directly. If this card is destroyed, you can return the equipped monster to your hand.

 

Some of the general grammar is wrong. I'd like to re-write this, if I may.

 

Select 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Deck and Special Summon it in Attack Position. Equip the selected monster with this card. The equipped monster cannot be used for a Tribute Summon or Special Summon. Once per turn, by removing from play the top 2 cards of your Deck, the equipped monster can attack your opponent directly, until the End Phase. If the equipped monster would be destroyed by battle, return it to your hand instead.

 

Overall, I give the first one a 8.9/10

and the second a 8.5/10.

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Meh, have your rewording doesn't fit what I mean I will fix the other crap what I see fit.

 

Thanks for the comments.