chizuruotohime Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Nah...It's just a prototype of what Gothica Hero will be look like in the future...The original works will soon released after the Fancy Heroes~~!! I re-adjust its effects.............. [spoiler=Effect]When this Attack Positioned card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of Battle, Special Summon this card from your Graveyard to your side of the field during your next Stanby Phase. When this card was Special Summoned by its own effect, remove 1 of your opponent's monsters on their side of the field out of play. Comment and rate~~!!:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Op'd as hell !needs alot of drawbacks, or a single big one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 The monster who I can compare this one the best is Treeborn Frog. There are two differences: The effect of Treeborn Frog is restricted in work (only if you control no Spell Cards, Trap Cards or another Treeborn Frog), and even that way, Treeborn Frog is Limited. Devonaire has no such restrictions and has a powerful bonus effect. I believe it's obvious that this way this card is overpowered. But it's possible to make it more balanced. How about this one: During your Standby Phase, if "Gothica Hero Devonaire" exists in your Graveyard, you can Special Summon this monster from your Graveyard by paying 800 Life Points. If this effect is used, you skip your next Draw Phase. If this is the only monster you control when this monster is destroyed by battle, you can discard 1 card from your hand to remove from play the attacking monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 I don't think it that overpowered =/The effect only activates when its destroyed rather than sent to the Graveyard soo, it has limited ways in which it must be destroyed. and comes at the Standby Phase making it a free Revival Jam that comes back in any Position you wish. There might be a little problem that it doesn't matter how its destroyed. I would suggest activating only when destroyed by battle.The removing from play effect is what worries me, if it removed stuff from the Graveyard and not the field, it would be balanced and still useful. Like it is now I can garantee its limit-worthy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
balir1307 Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 a bit oveerpowered, but at the same time it is pretty fair 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 hmmmmm... It is just the prototype anyways....I just thought of that effect and I dunno if it is balanced or overpowered... Like her ability to remove 1 monster from play when Devonaire is Special Summoned by its own effect. Is this too overpowered or the effect when she is destroyed neither way not sent. I think Devonaire's weakness is being removed from play. That's why there are the critics like you guys who comment about it an I'm glad about it becuse I will know if I will adjust it or not.... A million thanks about your suggestions and comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 bad prototype make card better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 The real artwork will be released when my artist is finnished with Fancy Hero Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 " When this face-up Attack Position monster is destroyed by battle " << maybe this way it will sound less Op'd ^^" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 " When this face-up Attack Position monster is destroyed by battle " << maybe this way it will sound less Op'd ^^" Ok I'll try for that~~!! Thanks for the help~!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilikesharks2020 Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 -1 OP'd -1 When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon this card from your Graveyard to your side of the field during your next Stanby Phase. When this card was Special Summoned by its own effect, remove 1 of your opponent's monsters on his/her side of the field out of play. -2 overall 8/10 G00D J0B Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Pretty simple effect. It can keep coming back easily and removes a card each time. Maybe make it so you take damage each time it's special summoned or something. =\ Not bad though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Pretty simple effect. It can keep coming back easily and removes a card each time. Maybe make it so you take damage each time it's special summoned or something. =\ Not bad though. Yeah that's right.....Sometimes you need sacrifices to win~~!!-1 OP'd -1 When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard' date=' Special Summon this card from your Graveyard to your side of the field during your next Stanby Phase. When this card was Special Summoned by its own effect, remove 1 [b']of your opponent's monsters on his/her side of the field out of play. -2 overall 8/10 G00D J0B Thanks for the comment and rate~~! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 I re-edited the effects this time........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Fix:When this face-up Attack Position card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon this card from your Graveyard to your field during your next Stanby Phase. When this card is Special Summoned by it's own effect, select 1 monster your opponent controls and remove it from play. nice prototype I like it I can't wait to see the real ones ^_^ 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 minor OCG errors, effect is well balanced and pic is great 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 @ sasukeThanks for the corrections and the cheer~~!! @ragnarok_1945Thanks for the rate and comment~~!! Good thing I edited the effect...It was just overpowered like they when I post its first effect.................. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leon Lonewolf Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 pic is cute, effect is good. 9.99/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 @lionheart thanks a million Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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