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Bone Monsters (Drawings by NickLD) [ADDED BONE SOLDIER]


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Here is my newest drawn card, bone dragon.

im gonna make a set of bone monsters, so until then i put the fusion material monsters to be BEWD and mammoth graveyard (fits pretty well)

ART IS BY ME! if u wanna use it, PM me a link to the thread, and visible credit. thx!

rate, comment, enjoy!

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Effect:

"Mammoth Graveyard"+"Blue-Eyes White Dragon"

Increase the ATK of this card by 300 points for each Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard. Each turn, you may remove 1 Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard from play to negate the effect of a trap or magic card that specifically designates this card as a target and destroy it.

 

here is my newest one, i decided to do a bone set.

i will change the fusion material monsters on bone dragon when i get the right monsters for it.

this is bone soldier, again, art by me. same rules apply if u want to use it.

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Trap is capitalized;

Spell (capitalized)' date=' not magic;

and "specifically targets."

 

The pic is okay and its effect rather lame and not so good.

 

6.5/10.

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aah i usually cap those they just slip by this time xD

also, it can be spell or magic, its just that the newer version is spell. either works, they just need to be capitalized xD

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Now lets make it with different OCG in this comment (the new one):

 

"Mammoth Graveyard"(space here)+(space here)"Blue-Eyes White Dragon"

This card gains 300 ATK for each Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can remove from play a Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard to negate the effect of an opponent's Spell or Trap Card that targets this card and destroy that card.

 

yes there were some details in the OCG (about 1 or 2 only) but I couldn't point them out.. I just reworded everything xD

nice job with the pic, the effect is ok. I like that it can be Special Summoned by means other than by Fusion Summon or only with the above Fusion Material Monsters.. all in all, I like it enough for a 10/10

although for my taste, I would like to see the entire dragon but that's just my taste/opinion ;)

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lol

one thing about ur fix:

u said "This card gains 300 ATK for each Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard."

the way i put is correct. im looking at my blue eyes shining dragon right now (he has that effect) and i copied it word for word, so i know tis right xD

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lol

one thing about ur fix:

u said "This card gains 300 ATK for each Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard."

the way i put is correct. im looking at my blue eyes shining dragon right now (he has that effect) and i copied it word for word' date=' so i know tis right xD

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I know. But my correction is new OCG, I'm sure its been a couple of years since Shining Dragon came out, that's already olc OCG xD

lol my errors are never that notorious ;)

 

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but old OCG, new OCG, both are acceptable as long as they are not mixed so.. its good either way

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The pictures are awesome. You're really good with them. Although, I have to agree with tyler ex about Bone Soldier's OCG. When you put "Summon 1 Bone Soldier...." the term summon refers to Normal Summon, Special Summon, Flip Summon, and or Advance (tribute) Summon. Because simply saying Summon is so vague, you might want to put Special Summon to be specific about it.

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