Skuldur Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 I decided to pick up a pencil and draw. Here's the outcome. [spoiler=[b]V1[/b]] [spoiler=[b]V2[/b]] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murch Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 meh, doesn't look quite human. work on your skills and you will reach the smexy level! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Work on the face - try to get some emotion going on there.The hands seem too thick, make them thinner.The shirt is pretty simple.Nice brests ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Work on the face - try to get some emotion going on there. It has emotion' date=' if you don't look at the eyes. I was too lazy to fix them.[/b']The hands seem too thick, make them thinner. The left hand yeahThe shirt is pretty simple.I know. D: I'm learning how to do the folds and suchNice brests ;D=D This was actually a doodle. Besides, I suck at making girls. =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 [align=center]Needs more cleavage IMO... Nice job on the shading (sorta). I find it helps give a more realistic look when you smudge the graphite with your fingers. If you did that, I think it would look a lot better.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 [align=center]Needs more cleavage IMO... How much cleavage do you need? O_O Nice job on the shading (sorta). I find it helps give a more realistic look when you smudge the graphite with your fingers. If you did that' date=' I think it would look a lot better.[/color'][/align] I'll try it I will be posting V2 soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 [align=center]Needs more cleavage IMO... How much cleavage do you need? O_OLiek' date=' low-cut shirt/[s']nipples[/s]Bikini O.o Nice job on the shading (sorta). I find it helps give a more realistic look when you smudge the graphite with your fingers. If you did that, I think it would look a lot better.[/align] I'll try it I will be posting V2 soon.M'kay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Shes gawt big bewbs! D: It's decent. Better than I could do. But not quite there. Still great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 V2 added. Comment please. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 It' not to my taste, but it's OK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 It' not to my taste' date=' but it's OK.[/quote'] You don't like manga, so it's understandable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Needs more cleavage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Needs more cleavage. Care to comment on the other stuff? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 It' not to my taste' date=' but it's OK.[/quote'][align=center]No offense but, you're gay aren't you? We all know girls aren't to your taste. No offense. For the smudge-shading, really really smudge it. Like so much, you can't see any more pencil lines... But, it's a good start. i see you also tried some folds. They came out pretty good, but they're shaded to darkly. Try to take an eraser and lightly tap on each fold for about 60 secs... These are only suggestions. You don't have to do this, but it might make it look a little better. V2 is better, but it seems to be missing something (other than more cleavage)... I hate it when that happens... :/ EDIT: I found out what seemed lacking... The nose was shaded like the light source was from the left, but the left shoulder is shaded where the light should hit. To help with that, I suggest making an arch where you want the light source to be, then, make lines according to that arch on where you think should be a shadow, then, smudge it for a realistic feel. Hope I helped. =D[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 It' not to my taste' date=' but it's OK.[/quote'][align=center]No offense but, you're gay aren't you? We all know girls aren't to your taste. No offense. For the smudge-shading, really really smudge it. Like so much, you can't see any more pencil lines... But, it's a good start. i see you also tried some folds. They came out pretty good, but they're shaded to darkly. Try to take an eraser and lightly tap on each fold for about 60 secs... These are only suggestions. You don't have to do this, but it might make it look a little better. V2 is better, but it seems to be missing something (other than more cleavage)... I hate it when that happens... :/ EDIT: I found out what seemed lacking... The nose was shaded like the light source was from the left, but the left shoulder is shaded where the light should hit. To help with that, I suggest making an arch where you want the light source to be, then, make lines according to that arch on where you think should be a shadow, then, smudge it for a realistic feel. Hope I helped. =D[/align] I know what you mean. I'm never satisfied with what I make. >_> EDIT: Thanks, I'll just move the shadow on the nose to the other side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 [align=center]Yeah, I just got into shading myself... I'd post some of my drawings but my scanner is so confusing :? I'm just glad to help :D. If you need any more help, just ask. ;)[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Needs more cleavage. Care to comment on the other stuff? The fact I didn't put anything else means that I like everything else. But yeah, needs moar cleavage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted June 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Needs more cleavage. Care to comment on the other stuff? The fact I didn't put anything else means that I like everything else. But yeah' date=' needs moar cleavage.[/quote'] No cleavage for you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Needs more cleavage. Care to comment on the other stuff? The fact I didn't put anything else means that I like everything else. But yeah' date=' needs moar cleavage.[/quote'] No cleavage for you and Force_Flex![align=center]fix'd.I suggested cleavage first![/whine] Aside from my childish moment, it's a great little sketch ;)[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 18, 2009 Report Share Posted June 18, 2009 You are on the good side :D -flip the shade of the nose-Make her have an expression-Give her a forehead-Don't make the hair fall inwards like if it was supposed to follow the neck lines-make the arms a little less thin and a little longer.-Don't make the hair have an outline, make some (very few) hairs slightly outside of the outline of the hair, no hair is perfect ;) other than that, that's good for a start :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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