eyeofthedeck Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 Nice fic. I didn't have enough time to read all 5 chapters but I read the intro and first chapter and apart from the capalization errors, I like it. EDIT: I got the time to read the rest and I'm DEFINITELY hooked. Great fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted September 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 Nice fic. I didn't have enough time to read all 5 chapters but I read the intro and first chapter and apart from the capalization errors' date=' I like it. EDIT: I got the time to read the rest and I'm DEFINITELY hooked. Great fic.[/quote'] Thank you very much. You are getting the review rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 Good fic. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted September 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 Good fic. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I'll update when possible. School starts in 3 days, but I'll see what I can do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 BUMP again. Really, please rate it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyeofthedeck Posted September 9, 2009 Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 Maybe people wil rate it if you add a new chapter? It would be nice, but I know from experience that it can take ages to write a single chapter for a fic unless you're Weather Report or Kendo Fish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted September 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 Maybe people wil rate it if you add a new chapter? It would be nice' date=' but I know from experience that it can take ages to write a single chapter for a fic unless you're Weather Report or Kendo Fish.[/quote'] I've got the end planned out already. I'll try and finish it before I leave YCM in 7 weeks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The7thSorrow Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 very nice, wish the duel was more clear. Try spacing lines out a bit. Also, would like to see Life Points, it would make it easier to follow. I defiantly am going to read the rest of this story, really good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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